Talk:Play (Jennifer Lopez song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 20:05, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

• There is one disambiguation link (Robin Williams) fix it. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

• Unlinked Arre 22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Infobox

• I notice that electropop is present in the infobox, but it's not in the prose?

• I've removed it. Arre 22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• I have done some copy-editing. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
• Link critics — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
• Why don't change United States to US Billboard Hot 100? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
• Add some information for the live performances.— Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

• Done Arre 22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Background and release

• This section lacks information to be honest. You mention that was released, but how? Radio, digitally, physically? Where in which territory? And as I can see there is no a release history table, make one. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

• I'll do that when I'm on next in a few hours. Thankyou for starting the review. :) Arre 22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

Composition and critical reception

• BAG & Arnthor, why is Bag with capital letters? — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
• A writer from Telegram & Gazette called the track "Madonna-esque". "called" is not the most appropriate word, try changing it. — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
• Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine commented that "so many of the tracks" on the album J.Lo ---> remove J.Lo — Tomíca^(T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

• done Arre 22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)

• Hi Tomica. Will you be finishing this review? Btw, a release history table has been added. And the first section is simply titled "Background" now. Arre 14:02, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

• I will soon, I am busy in real life. :S — Tomíca^(T2ME) 16:58, 5 May 2013 (UTC)

• Ok Arre, sorry again that I delayed the passing of the article. I fixed the other issues and now I will pass it ;) ! — Tomíca^(T2ME) 13:11, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

• Thankyou so much Tomica :) no worries! Arre 13:17, 15 May 2013 (UTC)

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Chorus

In fact the chorus is sung by Christina Milian. 37.109.146.106 (talk) 20:25, 21 May 2024 (UTC)