Talk:Pluteus nevadensis

Latest comment: 12 years ago by J Milburn in topic GA Review
Good articlePluteus nevadensis has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 3, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the fungus Pluteus nevadensis was named after the Colima volcano?

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 10:32, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Hope you don't mind me snapping up your articles- they tend to go quickly. Happy to step back for a time if you'd prefer. Review to follow soon... J Milburn (talk) 10:32, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'm grateful to anybody takes the time to read and review these articles on obscure fungi! Sasata (talk) 17:58, 28 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • "a orange- or scarlet-colored cap" an?
  • "cub-shaped" Club-shaped, presumably?
  • "the fungus belongs in the section Celluloderma." Perhaps a list of other species in the section? That's not included in the species article, and could be useful information to help situate it.
  • specific epithet is a dablink
  • "cub-shaped" Club-shaped, presumably?
  • "Sometimes white-yellowish flesh is underneath the cuticle." Odd- perhaps "Sometimes there is white-yellowish flesh underneath the cuticle." or "Sometimes white-yellowish flesh can be found underneath the cuticle."?
  • "covered with cottony whitish mycelium." Mycelia is the plural?
  • "with short or elongated neck" a short, or elongated necks.
  • "sphaeropedunculate" and "pedicel" go undefined
  • I feel some pictures would add visual interest to the page- have you tried contacting the authors? Perhaps a few emails could get a picture of Pluteus aurantiorugosus at least? As it's known from a very limited area, perhaps a map would be an option?

The sources seem appropriate and correctly formatted. I'll have a double check of some of the sources if I'm able to access them (my access to materials is limited at the moment, as my library is unable to determine whether I'm an undergraduate, postgraduate or alumni...) but, for now, this is looking about ready. J Milburn (talk) 10:56, 27 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for another review JM. The points I haven't responded to have been fixed; will add another pic later if I'm successful with emails... Sasata (talk) 17:58, 28 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Ok, I'm happy to promote at this time- I've not been able to look closely at the sources, but I am happy to accept them in good faith. Good luck with the picture hunting! J Milburn (talk) 18:51, 28 August 2012 (UTC)Reply