Talk:Pocket Operators
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Promotional text
editHello Schminnte. In reply to your message asking about specific areas where the promotional tone is an issue, unfortunately it affects most of the article. Some examples are " the inexpensive Pocket Operator was a surprise to the music industry", "Pocket Operators share the same eccentric minimalist design", "Following on from the success of the Pocket Operators". Regards, MrsSnoozyTurtle 05:58, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
@MrsSnoozyTurtle:, if it is promotional then shouldn't it be a tag for that? I'll change that and get into it Schminnte (talk • contribs) 11:47, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
Hi, I've tried to remove all the promotional language that I could see and have removed the tag for that reason. Feel free to add it back or delete any more wording that you find. Thanks. Schminnte (talk • contribs) 12:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)