Talk:Point of service plan

Usage of second-person ("you") in the article

I added the {{you}} template to the article because I believe the several usages of second-person pronouns are inappropriate for encyclopedic tone. Here is the portion of the article that uses the second person, with bold formatting added to the second-person pronouns:

When you enroll in a POS plan, you are required to choose a primary care physician to monitor your health care. This primary care physician must be chosen from within the health care network, and becomes your "point of service".

The primary POS physician may then make referrals outside the network, but then only some compensation will be offered by your health insurance company.

For medical visits within the health care network, paperwork is completed for you. If you choose to go outside the network, it is your responsibility to fill out the forms, send bills in for payment, and keep an accurate account of health care receipts.

Firefeather (talk) 00:35, 26 February 2011 (UTC)