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Quoting Wikipedia editor: This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page. This article may require cleanup to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. The specific problem is: style and adherence to the Manual of Style. (February 2014) This article may require copy editing for style and adherence to the Manual of Style. (February 2014) This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations. (February 2014) This article needs additional citations for verification. (February 2014)

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Thank you for the alerts concerning the deficiencies of the article as it now stands. I will seek additional citations, delete the "citation needed" remarks where appropriate, and re-read the Manual of Style to determine how to better comply with it. However, any specific style deficiencies you point out will help me focus on what needs correcting. JCvP 02:19, 11 February 2014 (UTC)