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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Peer reviewers: Rorazi.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:36, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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The tone is neutral, and there is a good amount of references for the article. However, I saw some sentence structures that were off, like the first sentence from the Prevention section. Maybe rephrase it, "The risk for postoperative wounds can be reduced by..." or "Postoperative complications can be prevented by..." Also, maybe consider expanding the Risks section. The heading "Healing Sequence" could be improved and changed to something like, "Recovery" or "Steps in Healing," or "Steps in Recovery." I hope these suggestions are useful! --Rorazi (talk) 13:45, 3 March 2017 (UTC)Reply