Talk:Power & Control/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by (CA)Giacobbe in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: (CA)Giacobbe (talk · contribs) 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

Hey Wiki, I'll be reviewing this! --Giacobbe talk 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

General

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  • Looks like there's a disambiguation link to correct
  •   Done

Lead and infobox

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  • "Diamandis collaborated with Steve Angello while writing the track" — Just a suggestion, but it may be beneficial to let the reader know he was a member of Swedish House Mafia? Try "Diamandis collaborated with former Swedish House Mafia member Steve Angello while writing the track".
  •   Done
  • Rest of lead and infobox looks good

Background and composition

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  • Same thing just about Angello
  •   Done

So just fix those little things and this should be an easy pass.--Giacobbe talk 02:52, 8 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

Good work, passing!--Giacobbe talk 02:44, 9 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

Comment from non-reviewer

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"So So Gay" (refs #14 and #18) is not considered a reliable source. I would replace those. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:53, 8 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

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