Talk:Pre-Madonna/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: -- CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 14:05, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

Will start at some point later today.

Reviewing? — Legolas ^(talk2me) 07:48, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

Apologies... I had a bereavement in the family to deal with this. review will be completed soon.... -- Lil_℧niquℇ №1 ^[talk] 17:42, 5 February 2011 (UTC)

OMG! Please take your time. — Legolas ^(talk2me) 04:39, 7 February 2011 (UTC)

Do you need someone to take over?--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 17:49, 13 February 2011 (UTC)

Ideally yes... — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 ^[talk]

I will take it from here Unique. Don't worry, I'll cover for you. I'll have the review up probably for tomorrow.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 03:59, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

How's the review coming along? Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:45, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

Hi WizardMan. So the full review will be up tomorrow, and another editor, my freind BlackJacks101 will do the fixes recquired.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 00:11, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

Review

Lead

• The album was released in 1997 by Stephen Bray, who was the producer of the songs when they were recorded -> I mean they weren't released by him, better yet write it was released by him and distributed by Soultone

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• in the European countries -> remove "the"

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• Bray decided, Bray decided. Switch it up a bit

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Background

• female vocalist, female vocalist, vocalist, female vocalist

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• This led to a dispute between Dan and her, resulting in Madonna leaving the band -> lead, leaving, there is a change in tense. Keep it consistent in each sentence

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• Now Madonna was determined - c/e

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Composition

• re-recorded -> how was it re-recorded if Madonna didn't know of the project?

It says that Madonna re-recorded the song for the B-sides of those songs....not that it was re-recorded for the album--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

• "Stay" and "Don't You Know" were combined into one song, "Stay", -> ?

Madonna combined those two songs into 1 song on Like A Virgin called Stay...those two songs are on the album separately in there original forms--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Release and reception

• Mark Egan from Rocky Mountain News felt that -> again tense issues. The quote is in present tense. To avoid issues "Mark Egan writes
• Again on next review
• Check the rest of them

 Done--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Small article so small fixes. I'll check back after they are fixed.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 02:07, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I gotta go now, will continue later today--Blackjacks101 (talk) 12:55, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I think I'm done =D--Blackjacks101 (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

Good job. Passing.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:23, 4 March 2011 (UTC)