Talk:Prince Family Paper/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:41, 1 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Overall this is a good article, though I do have a couple nitpicks:

  • The two sentences on Darwinism (in the lead and body, repsectively) sound virtually identical and therefore repetitive; reword one to mix it up a bit.
  • "They didn’t let Michael off the hook. Instead the writers took a dark and dirty turn toward the truly tragic, in the literal sense of the word." <- I'm nitpicky on quotes having cites at the end of the respective sentence, even though I'm positive it uses the same ref as the next sentence. Same with a couple others.

This is all I have though. I'll put it on hold and pass it when it's fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:41, 1 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Looks good, article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:46, 1 April 2010 (UTC)Reply