Talk:Priscilla Duffield

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Ian Rose in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

Will aim to get this in the next few days... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 12:19, 22 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

Toolbox check
  • Dab/EL checker not working.
  • Checked duplinks via another tool and removed one.
Prose/detail
  • Just a little copyediting, hope no issues.
  • Short and sharp but I think enough there for GA.
Structure
  • The lead certainly does its job of establishing what made her noteworthy but I think it might be a bit short for GA -- perhaps a couple more sentences to flesh out her life details, e.g. "Born Priscilla Browne in California...", then noting her marriage / change of name and perhaps that she spent her later years in Colorado?
Images
  • Licence checks out.
Referencing
  • Fully cited to what look like reliable sources.
  • Formatting seems okay but providing OCLCs for two books looks inconsistent -- suggest none (my personal preference) or all of them.

Pretty well there... Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 05:14, 25 October 2014 (UTC)Reply