Talk:Prisoners of the Sun/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 07:31, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Lead

• Can you wikilink the 2001 musical like you did for the video game?
  • Good point; done! Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Background

• "Some Belgians were upset that Hergé was willing to work for a newspaper controlled by the then occupying Nazi administration, although he was heavily enticed by the size of Le Soir's readership, which reached 600,000." - What does "he was heavily enticed" mean in this case?
  • It refers to the fact that he was enticed to work for the newspaper by the prospect of his comic strip getting a far wider readership than it had ever had before. We can reword it if you think it should be clarified ? Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:33, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

Influences

• Farr mentions Columbus using the prediction of a solar eclipse. Can you add that info?
  • Good point - I've added the referenced information here. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:22, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

References

• Footnotes #7 and #29 - Assouline and Peeters pages are missing.
  • I see what's happened; the page numbers were in there but weren't formatted properly, thus not appearing in the article itself. I've corrected that problem. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:24, 11 March 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.

   Pass or Fail:

Once again, great job, Midnightblueowl. — Ssven2 ^{Speak 2 me} 06:48, 12 March 2015 (UTC)