Talk:Protestant church music during and after the Reformation
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Epiphyllumlover in topic Questions to article in draft state
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Questions to article in draft state
editWithout wanting to change too much, I make notes of things I believe are unclear or should be changed for other reasons, in no particular order, and feel to free to comment under each item:
- The key words in the lead - regulative and normative need a link and/or an explanation.
- Headers are often too long, and should be sentence case.
- Once "Protestant Reformation" is established, use only "Reformation" - which is our article anyway.
- Try more factual images. Better an image of the Theses, than the "hammering" which is some artist's invention.
- Vatican is a place, - probably the church which came to be called Catholic is meant.
- What are "spoken songs"?
- In the beginning, it was Lutheran rather than more general Protestant, - please differentiate.
- Link a term only once.
- Avoid "Roman Catholic", - our article is Catholic Church.
More to come, perhaps tomorrow. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:59, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
I handled a few, marked . --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:05, 24 March 2020 (UTC)
- Checked one more.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 23:25, 25 March 2020 (UTC)
Changing article name
editI think it could be moved to "Church music during the Reformation"--this is shorter than "Protestant Church music during the Reformation" and relies on the assumption that "Reformation" assumes Protestantism given the context. I want to know how others feel about this though before I do anything.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 23:22, 25 March 2020 (UTC)