Talk:Psychological journeys of Middle-earth/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• Some duplinks according to the tool.

• The only ones I see are in image captions, which is considered acceptable (once in text, once in caption).

• "Scholars including psychoanalysts have" Commas

• Added.

• "stories of" Maybe "about" instead?

• Done.

• "Guide figures" Why the capital G?

• Removed.

• "On Klein's theory" and "On Vygotsky's theory" isn't "in xyz's theory" a more common construction?

• Done.

• "Gollum as Devouring Mother" This was mentioned in the table earlier, but you could add a gloss explaining it here as well.

• Glossed.

• The images are all licensed and used correctly.

• Noted.

• The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
• Spotchecks:
  • Flieger, Verlyn (1996). "Tolkien's Experiment with Time: The Lost Road, The Notion Club Papersand J.W. Dunne". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Matthews, Dorothy (1975). "The Psychological Journey of Bilbo Baggins". In Lobdell, Jared (ed.). A Tolkien Compass. Verifies all claims made.
  • Harl, Allison (2007). "The monstrosity of the gaze: critical problems with a film adaptation of The Lord of the Rings". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
  • Grant, Patrick (1973). "Tolkien: Archetype and Word". Cross Currents (Winter 1973). Verifies all claims made.

• Noted.

• Nice article, but I am starting to think that psychoanalysts have entirely too much time on their hands. AryKun (talk) 14:53, 28 July 2023 (UTC)

• Keeps them from doing anything worse! Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:58, 28 July 2023 (UTC)

• Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 15:14, 28 July 2023 (UTC)

You're not wrong. 84.216.129.214 (talk) 10:21, 30 July 2023 (UTC)