Talk:Pumpin' Up the Party/GA1
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GA Review
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:13, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Well done.
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- In the Live performances section, please link "Best of Both Worlds" to its correspondence article, as at the moment it stands out as a disambiguation. May I suggest that you add {{-}} to the bottom of the Live performances section, this is a way so that the screenshot not interfere with the charts section.
- Disambiguation is fixed, but what do you mean by "interfere"? It looks fine on my computer. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 20:39, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- Check [on the disambiguation]. In my computer screen, the chart is in the middle of the section. I guess, I'll just leave it alone.
- Disambiguation is fixed, but what do you mean by "interfere"? It looks fine on my computer. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 20:39, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- In the Live performances section, please link "Best of Both Worlds" to its correspondence article, as at the moment it stands out as a disambiguation. May I suggest that you add {{-}} to the bottom of the Live performances section, this is a way so that the screenshot not interfere with the charts section.
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Not that much to do. If the above queries can be dealt with, I will pass the article. Good luck!
- Pass or Fail:
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:13, 28 July 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you to ipodnano for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 21:05, 28 July 2010 (UTC)