Talk:Pyromaniac (Oh Land song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 11:47, 1 September 2017 (UTC)

Another great article I'm tempted to pass immediately. Even less concerns on this one.

• "features a "woo-hoo" hook" - I found this very confusing. I'd suggest just losing it entirely, or at the very least, reword it so its clearer, something similar to how it appears in the next section.

Done

• "It features the singer in a variety of fashions" - again, a little confusing. I assumed 'fashions' could be used interchangeably with 'outfits', though I felt the need to read ahead to make sure. I'd suggest changing to 'outfits'.

Done

• Who is Anne Sofie Madsen? Why is she considered important enough to mention as the clothes designer? I'd suggest dropping this also.

Done

• The article mentions the music video contains footage of the singer skinny dipping with a group of friends. This implies the video also contains full nudity. I'd mention the fact the music video cited features censor bars.

Done±

That's all from me. Looking forward to passing this one too. Freikorp (talk) 11:47, 1 September 2017 (UTC)

HI Carbrera. We're a few hours short of seven days since the review was completed. I've noticed you've had several other of your GANs reviewed recently, and accordingly might be feeling a bit overwhelmed. I'd be happy to leave this open for a little longer but if nothing is done after, say, 10 days, I'll close the nomination, which I think would be a shame since it's so close to passing. Freikorp (talk) 23:55, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

Freikorp – Thank you very much for both the review and your patience. I'm incredibly grateful for it. I have addressed your concerns in the article. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 03:28, 9 September 2017 (UTC).

Very happy to be passing this. Well done. Freikorp (talk) 09:09, 9 September 2017 (UTC)