Talk:Quests in Middle-earth/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:39, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• Lots of duplinks found using the usual tool.

• Removed.

• "into a quest" should be "on a quest"

• Done.

• "Half-elf" Elf should be capitalized?

• Done.

• 'Frodo "goes with the pain of a sad but noble decision"' doesn't parallel the structure of the earlier clause ("Bilbo's... venal motives"). It would sound better if it did.

• Fixed.

• The images are all licensed and used correctly.

• Noted.

• Just as a compliment, the article is very nicely illustrated; the medieval illustrations are used particularly well for the more abstract points.

• Thank you!

• The sources are all reliable and formatted correctly.
• Spotchecks:
  • Birns, Nicholas (2012). "'You Have Grown Very Much': The Scouring of the Shire and the Novelistic Aspects of The Lord of the Rings". Journal of the Fantastic in the Arts. Verifies all claims made.
  • Hirsch, Bernhard (2014). "After the "end of all things": The Long Return Home to the Shire". Tolkien Studies. Verifies all claims made.
  • Moore, Clare (2022). "Goddess and Mortal: The Celtic and the French Morgan le Fay in Tolkien's Silmarillion". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
• Overall a great article that has just a couple minor prose issues. AryKun (talk) 14:45, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:03, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

Okay, will be passing the article. AryKun (talk) 15:10, 25 July 2023 (UTC)