Talk:Quinton Hooker/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:39, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Concerns have been addressed. Thank you for your time. JTtheOG (talk) 07:01, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Needs to be longer (please add 2 paragraphs)

Early life

• For some reason, reference #1 doesn't work for me

High school career

• Can He played with the Howard Pulley Panthers on the AAU circuit, although most of the attention focused on his teammate, five-star recruit Tyus Jones be extended or merged into a paragraph?

College career

• Although he expected to redshirt his freshman year please add was after he
• With four guards graduating the year prior, Hooker's minutes doubled in his sophomore season and he was the only player to start and appear in all 30 games, leading the team in scoring (12.8 ppg), assists (4.2 apg), and steals (1.5 spg). not sourced
• Nevertheless, the Fighting Hawks finished third-last in the conference with a 4–14 record (8–22 overall), failing to qualify for the conference tournament. unsourced

• In his junior season, he stepped into a leadership role on a team with no seniors, may I recommend changing "he" into Hooker
• He ranked third in the Big Sky in scoring with 20.1 points per game, which was also the best scoring mark in school history since UND moved up to Division I. unsourced
• Not sure how I feel about words like exploded as it seems to be a WP:EUPHEMISM or MOS:PUFFERY.
• Are two references necessary for Lou Henson National Player of the Week and, for the second time that month, Big Sky Player of the Week?
• Reference 19 doesn't state Hooker was named to the all-tournament team
• In the Senior season paragraph, you don't mention his name until the fifth sentence
• The team won seven of their last eight regular-season games to finish with a 14–4 Big Sky record and the regular-season conference title. unsourced

Professional

• He made his pro debut on September 30, coming off the bench during a defeat to Miasto Szkła Krosno, and by December he was the starting point guard. unsourced
• He joined French second-tier club please add the before French
• Vichy-Clermont finished in third place in the league but were upset in the first round of the playoffs by Gries Oberhoffen. unsourced
• Additionally, he played in 18 BCL games, posting averages of 8.7 points, 3.3 rebounds, 2.9 assists and 1.4 steals per game. unsourced

Notes

Is there anything that can be added for personal life?