Talk:Rad Mobile/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by TarkusAB in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 20:32, 26 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


I'll review it. TarkusABtalk 20:32, 26 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Since we have two scores (Sinclair and Beep), maybe put them in a reception score box?
  • Just want to make sure, Takashi Yuda is being credited for design on Gale Racer. Are we talking game design or graphic design? Usually the Japanese mean art when they say design, while English sources mean game design when they say it.
  • You should write out "Computer and Video Games"
  • "Horowitz noting that based" Noting should not be used here, use another word like "believing" or "feeling" because it's an opinion.
  • Did you check page 71 in Raze #7? There is some small coverage there if it's of any use. [1]
@Red Phoenix: Pass but remove the scores from prose now that they're in an infobox. TarkusABtalk 17:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)Reply