Talk:Radioactive (Rita Ora song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
Add a comma after debut studio albumShouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency with the infobox?Mention that it was the fourth single from the album- Can't you add anything to the lead about the lyrics of the song?
"was met with mixed to positive responses" → "received mixed to positive responses"Shouldn't both certifications use either by or from for consistency?Simply change to premiered rather than bothering to mention it was uploaded to the YouTube channel in the leadMaybe add a mention of critical commentary about Ora's fashion?
Background and composition
editAgain, shouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency?The second and third sentences should be merged, also the release year of Ora is not needed in the body- Why does it say multiple remixes including then list out all of the ones in the sources?
- I do not quite understand the question, what would you suggest? Iaof2017 (talk) 14:57, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Lowercase the Flexican per MOS:THEMUSIC""Radioactive" is a" → "Musically, "Radioactive" is a"Should electro be piped to Electro (music) instead, possibly?- To elaborate on my previous comment, are there not any sources discussing the lyrics?
- Unfortunately no, it was quite hard to find any source about the song in general. Iaof2017 (talk) 14:52, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Reception
editFix spelling of Rihanna using [] to insert her name in the quoteResolve MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section"As Ora's sixth charting single in the United Kingdom," → "As Ora's sixth charting single in the UK,"Mention that the 200,000 units were sold in the UK
Music video
editRemove "for "Radioactive"" after accompanying music video"sits in a floating chair" → "spins in a floating chair" per the source- [24][28] being invoked in two consecutive sentences is WP:OVERCITE, so only invoke these two after the last one of those and the sentence two later
- Fine now? Iaof2017 (talk) 14:52, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
"we are used to."" → "we are used to"." per MOS:QUOTE"used in the video" → "used in the video were"
Track listing
edit- Good
Charts
edit- Good
Certifications
edit- Good
Release history
editFormat → Format(s)Label → Label(s)
References
edit- Copyvio score looks great at 23.7%!!!
Wikilink Spotify on ref 1Ref 6 is missing a publisherWP:OVERLINK of Digital Spy on ref 12Change ref 15's publisher to Official Charts CompanyCite Complex as work/website instead on ref 26, piping to Complex (magazine) per MOS:LINK2SECT
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this one! --K. Peake 11:23, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Kyle Peake:, thank you for taking the time to review. I have addressed your comments and left few respondes above. Iaof2017 (talk) 15:01, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, this looks fab and top job on implementing the remixes fix! --K. Peake 18:42, 8 November 2022 (UTC)