Talk:Rajesh Khanna: The Untold Story of India's First Superstar/GA1

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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 10:13, 23 April 2021 (UTC)

I'll take this. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:13, 23 April 2021 (UTC)

Lead

• forty-six-year-long --> 46 year

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

• Again, please refrain from using words like "highly". They aren't neutral.

Is well-publicized neutral? --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Synopsis

• "He followed the film with an" Please rephrase the beginning of this sentence.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

• Ditto, point two of Lead.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

• "The book ends with Khanna's illness." And his death as well right?

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Development

• "The book is Yasser Usman's first". Replace 'the book' with the book's name.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

• Did Usman interview his daughters?

I found no sources for these, but I feel he forgot to tell it to the press. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Release

• So you mean the book was first released as a soft copy on Amazon Kindle?

Yes, I do. Only Amazon that published the book's release date and the earliest one is its release on Amazon Kindle, 5 December 2014. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Link Advaita Kala

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 08:18, 25 April 2021 (UTC)

Thats it. Yashthepunisher (talk) 06:07, 25 April 2021 (UTC)