Talk:Rajiin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 23:03, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Suppose I will handle this. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 23:03, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I totally forgot I had claimed this. Here goes nothing:

1. Refs and external links look good.
2. Lead: The episode was written by Brent V. Friedman and Chris Black from a story idea from Friedman and Paul Brown. The episode was directed by Mike Vejar. I don't really like how there are two "The episodes". Maybe change it to The episode was written by Brent V. Friedman and Chris Black from a story idea from Friedman and Paul Brown, and was directed by Mike Vejar.
3. Production: Maybe wikilink second unit.
4. Production: Dell Yount appeared as B'Rat; Yount had previously appeared... change the second Yount to "he" to avoid repetition.
5. Reception: Michelle Erica Green said that she was pleased with the continuity seen in Rajiin Is the Rajiin here referring to the episode? If so, there should be quotation marks around it.
6. Reception: Blu ray should be Blu-ray.

On hold now. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 18:56, 20 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, I've addressed those points. Miyagawa (talk) 21:43, 20 October 2013 (UTC)