Talk:Rattlesnake Fire (2018)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic GA Review

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GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 02:04, 20 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Copyvio check

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Earwig says good to go.

Files

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  • File:2018 04 13-18.24.10.381-CDT.jpg: relevant, high quality and copyright free—valid public domain rationale.

Prose

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  • "Around 1:30 PM (Mountain Time)" – standard time or DST?
  • "The fire expanded onto the San Carlos Indian Reservation" – should it not be into?
  • "progress on April 22 thanks to improved weather" – change to "progress on April 22 due to improved weather" or something similar.
  • "which grew over the next day to 21,513 acres (8,706 ha)." – recommend "which grew to over 21,513 acres (8,706 ha) the next day."
  • "No definite cause was determined, however." – recommend "However, no definite cause could be determined."

Refs

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Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 3, 6, 8, 14, 16 or 22.

  • All of the refs have archive URL parameters aside from those from The Arizona Republic; is there a reason for this?
  • Oh I see! A shame.
  • Ref 13 is missing a date.
  • For ref 22, I would recommend mentioning the Ecological Restoration Institute.
  • Noted.

Other

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Infobox, coords, nav, cats, WP:ALT text and other templates good.

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