Talk:Real Groove/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
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This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good!
- Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
- "Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
- "and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
- "attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
- Pipe single to Single (music)
- "A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
- "with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
- Add a comma after second studio album
- "Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
- "Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
- Italicise Infinite Disco
Done
Background and composition
edit- "Minogue was recording her own vocals" → "Minogue recorded her own vocals"
- [6] needs to be at the end of the penultimate sentence from the Apple Music notes since that uses a quote
- "doesn't know what's coming with it and it" → "does not know what is coming before it" to be less wordy
- Remove overly obvious wikilink on London per WP:OVERLINK
- Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
- Pipe strings to String instrument on the audio sample text
- auto-tune → Auto-Tune on the text, with the wikilink
- Pipe synths to Synthesizer
- Pipe strings to String instrument
- Pipe talk-box to Talk box
- "Minogue uses auto-tuneed" → "Minogue uses Auto-Tuned" with the wikilink
- "found again with Minogue" → "found again, with Minogue"
- Remove wikilink on New York City
- Wikilink tempo
- Remove wikilink on electro-disco
- Pipe chorus to Refrain
- Remove wikilink on Tokyo
Done
Release and promotion
edit- Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
- "the day earlier." → "the previous day."
- Italicise Infinite Disco
- Where is the LED flooring sourced?
- Removed. LOVI33 04:31, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
- Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
- "Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"
Done
- "by BBC Radio 2 on 24 December 2020 with" → "by the station on 24 December 2020, with"
- "noting its "clean lines" → "noting the "clean lines" to avoid overusage of it
- "on a remixed version" → "on an alternate version" since no remix is specified by the source
- The source does not specify a digital download and streaming release, also shouldn't you stylize as "Studio 2054 Remix"?
- Added source to back up. "remix" should be lowercase per MOS:MUSICCAPS. LOVI33 19:01, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- "was released on 30 April 2021." → "was released on 30 April." to avoid overusage of the year
Done
Critical reception
edit- "compared it to that album." → "compared the song to the album."
- "Gil Kaufman "silk shirt" → "Gil Kaufman observed "silk shirt"
- Any idea which wiki Tony Manero should be piped to, if any?
- Per Tony Manero it seems as though he is a character played by John Travolta in two films. Perhaps I pipe it to one of the films? LOVI33 19:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- You should probably leave this actually; doing otherwise would be going against MOS:LINKSTYLE and the film is also unspecified. --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- "Mike Wass of Idolator called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
- "strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
- "by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
- "said it is" → "said the remix is"
- "Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
- "best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"
Done
Commercial performance
edit- Pipe UK Singles Sales Chart to List of UK Singles Sales Chart number ones
- "as an album chart." → "as an album track."
- "that is an increase by" → "that marked an increase of"
- "the following week becoming" → "the following week, becoming"
- "on the chart." → "on the Hot Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
- "16 in Hungary and 8" → "number 16 in Hungary and number 8"
- New Zealand Hot Singles chart → New Zealand Hot Singles Chart with the wikilink
Done
Track listings
edit- Good
Personnel
edit- Good
Charts
edit- Good
Release history
edit- Good
Footnotes
edit- Good
References
edit- Copyvio score looks great at 15.3%!!!
- Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:RSP
- Add url-access subscription to ref 34
Done
External links
edit- Good
Final comments and verdict
edit- On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this smooth review! --K. Peake 08:30, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- Kyle Peake thanks for the review. All of the issues have been addressed. LOVI33 19:15, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
- LOVI33 ✓ Pass once again to no surprise; I am consistently impressed with your hard work on these detailed articles! --K. Peake 19:44, 16 April 2022 (UTC)