Talk:Real Groove/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)Reply


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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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This looks like a decent article, which I will start on today! --K. Peake 08:39, 15 April 2022 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after fifteenth studio album
  • "Alida Garpestad Peck with a" → "Alida Garpestad Peck, with a"
  • "and featured vocoders," → "and features vocoders," with the wikilink
  • "attempting to win and ex" → "attempting to win an ex"
  • Pipe single to Single (music)
  • "A remix of it with English singer" → "A remix with English singer" and move the single info to this sentence instead, adding after the release date, "serving as the album's third single."
  • "with added instrumentation and" → "with additional instrumentation and" to be less repetitive
  • Add a comma after second studio album
  • "Some critics also appreciated" → "Some also appreciated" per the previous sentence beginning with a mention of critics
  • "Minogue performed the song" → "In late 2020, Minogue performed the song"
  • Italicise Infinite Disco

  Done

Background and composition

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  • "Minogue was recording her own vocals" → "Minogue recorded her own vocals"
  • [6] needs to be at the end of the penultimate sentence from the Apple Music notes since that uses a quote
  • "doesn't know what's coming with it and it" → "does not know what is coming before it" to be less wordy
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on London per WP:OVERLINK
  • Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
  • Pipe strings to String instrument on the audio sample text
  • auto-tune → Auto-Tune on the text, with the wikilink
  • Pipe synths to Synthesizer
  • Pipe strings to String instrument
  • Pipe talk-box to Talk box
  • "Minogue uses auto-tuneed" → "Minogue uses Auto-Tuned" with the wikilink
  • "found again with Minogue" → "found again, with Minogue"
  • Remove wikilink on New York City
  • Wikilink tempo
  • Remove wikilink on electro-disco
  • Pipe chorus to Refrain
  • Remove wikilink on Tokyo

  Done

Release and promotion

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  • Change the opening sentence to mentioning that it was included as the third track and adding the release date/labels after the album
  • "the day earlier." → "the previous day."
  • Italicise Infinite Disco
  • Where is the LED flooring sourced?
  • Remove wikilink on New York City per WP:OVERLINK
  • Remove social media platform introduction since everyone has heard of Instagram that is online
  • "Instagram where fans could dance for an hour to the song" → "Instagram, where fans could dance for an hour to it"

  Done

  • "by BBC Radio 2 on 24 December 2020 with" → "by the station on 24 December 2020, with"
  • "noting its "clean lines" → "noting the "clean lines" to avoid overusage of it
  • "on a remixed version" → "on an alternate version" since no remix is specified by the source
  • The source does not specify a digital download and streaming release, also shouldn't you stylize as "Studio 2054 Remix"?
  • "was released on 30 April 2021." → "was released on 30 April." to avoid overusage of the year

  Done

Critical reception

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  • "compared it to that album." → "compared the song to the album."
  • "Gil Kaufman "silk shirt" → "Gil Kaufman observed "silk shirt"
  • Any idea which wiki Tony Manero should be piped to, if any?
  • "Mike Wass of Idolator called the song" → "Wass called the song" per him already having been mentioned
  • "strut" while Mark Sutherland" → "strut", while Mark Sutherland"
  • "by in Ahad Sanwari's review for" → "by Ahad Sanwari for"
  • "said it is" → "said the remix is"
  • "Lipa's vocals saying she" → "Lipa's vocals, saying she"
  • "best dance songs of 2021 with" → "best dance songs of 2021, with"

  Done

Commercial performance

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  • Pipe UK Singles Sales Chart to List of UK Singles Sales Chart number ones
  • "as an album chart." → "as an album track."
  • "that is an increase by" → "that marked an increase of"
  • "the following week becoming" → "the following week, becoming"
  • "on the chart." → "on the Hot Dance/Electronic Songs chart."
  • "16 in Hungary and 8" → "number 16 in Hungary and number 8"
  • New Zealand Hot Singles chart → New Zealand Hot Singles Chart with the wikilink

  Done

Track listings

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  • Good

Personnel

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Good

Footnotes

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 15.3%!!!
  • Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:RSP
  • Add url-access subscription to ref 34

  Done

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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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