Talk:Red Guards in Tibet

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Brandi, Your article on the Red Guards in Tibet is excellent. I can tell you put a lot of time and thought into creating this. Your introduction and overview of this topic is very precise, and you included a lot of helpful information. As always, splendid work! Kate-Pure (talk) 00:21, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

Excellent article on the Red Guard in Tibet. I think you did way better than me. You should be very proud of this. --Aaedwar (talk) 02:09, 28 April 2017 (UTC)

Hello, your article is great, only improvement I would suggest is under the Gyenlo and Nyamdre section, I would change the way that the members names are listed, maybe make the names bold or add dashes. It would make everything clearer to read. Good job!--Alpatich (talk) 00:19, 30 April 2017 (UTC)

Great Job!!!! Very Informative. Great post overall! I really enjoyed what you had to say and thought you did a good job not adding any biased opinion to it. One thing that I thought might be helpful to enhance your article would be to add a "see also" section, linking to other wiki pages or even "an external links" section. This will help you to not be considered an "orphan article." Great job though, you had some really good information!--Tsadowsk (talk) 00:31, 1 May 2017 (UTC)Tsadowsk