Talk:Redcliffe railway station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Just one thing to do, some miscellaneous copy cleanup. 7-day hold to Steelkamp; ping when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:06, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: Done. Steelkamp (talk) 06:22, 20 January 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

CinS means User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.

• The station is one of three stations that were built as part of the Forrestfield–Airport Link project, and is served by Transperth's Airport line services. Remove comma (CinS)
• Construction began in mid-2017 and by June 2018, excavation was complete. Add comma after "mid-2017" because "By 2018, excavation was complete." is a standalone sentence. (CinS)
• It is served by trains every 12 minutes during peak hour, and every 15 minutes outside peak hour and on weekends and public holidays. Remove comma (CinS)
• There are also drop-off bays nearby, and a 500-bay car park approximately 400 metres (1,300 ft) south. Remove comma (CinS)
• Change "81%" to "81 percent" MOS:PERCENT
• Excavation started in early 2018 and was completed by June 2018, Perhaps Excavation started in early 2018 and was completed by June,
• Remove the hyphen from early-August

Also check for some MOS:SPELL09 fixes throughout.

Sourcing and spot checks

• Earwig turns up no issues.
• References are archived.

Five of the 49 references were selected randomly for spot checks:

• 7: 2016 WA Gov press release: The rail line will be tunnelled underground from a junction near Bayswater Station, under the Swan River and the airport, and out to Forrestfield. It is due to open in 2020. as well as other items in the preceding paragraph. Y
• 18: Construction update with a section, On Sunday 18 June, Premier Mark McGowan and Transport Minister Rita Saffioti released artist impressions for Belmont Station. Y
• 25 and 26: Two construction updates on the same sentence. The first talks about preparation for the arrival of the TBMs. The second notes the installation of the crane. Y
• 40: System map shows Redcliffe on the Airport line. Y

Images

There are four images, all the author's own work and libre licensed. All four have alt text.

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