Talk:Regine Tugade/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this, will post review soon. Kosack (talk) 13:35, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

• The Dededo, Guam link is a redirect, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked per WP:OVERLINK.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Is the update field needed? There's no competition statistics included so I'm not sure it is.
  • Well, it says that as of that date, she has no medals. I will update it since she still does not. Kees08 (Talk)

Lead

• Is female necessary? Looking at a number of other female athletes, this doesn't seem to be required.
  • Okay, removed. I think sometimes it is added if the name is not a common one, but Regine is clear enough. Kees08 (Talk)
• I think the opening sentence could do with rewording, "is a Guamanian sprinter" instead of "sprinter from Guam" would be more consistent with this style of page.
  • I think maybe it was like that so we did not have two links in a row, but Guamanian does flow better. Kees08 (Talk)
• Link Beijing and Cali.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "She competed in the 2016 Summer Olympics of the women's 100 metres preliminary round", this sentence is a bit muddled. Swap it round so the event comes first, "She competed in the women's 100 metres preliminary round at the 2016 Summer Olympics".
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• After the use in the second sentence, metres can simply be referred to as m. Change the Olympics event to women's 100 m instead of metres to maintain consistency.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• The opening mentions she competed in the 100m at the 2017 World Championships but the later section states it was the 200m?
  • Corrected Kees08 (Talk)
• Refs 2 and 3 need to be placed after punctuation.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Biography

• Again, link Dededo and leave Guam unlinked.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Link most valuable player.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• naval academy > United States Naval Academy
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

World Championships

• Change Beijing, China link to just Beijing, leaving China unlinked.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• '"She also competed in the 2017 World Championships. She competed", bit of repetition there. Perhaps, "She also competed in the 200 m at the 2017 World Championships, finishing sixth in..."?
  • Changed competed to ran Kees08 (Talk)
• Refs 15 and 16 have an unnecessary space between them.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

College career

• Link 2016 Summer Olympics.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Add "in Rio de Janeiro" after that.
  • Added a sentence so I could do this, since you cannot do it in section headers. Kees08 (Talk)

2016 Summer Olympics

• Ref 7 states she was one of just five athletes that were chosen to represent Guam, perhaps mention this?
  • Added Kees08 (Talk)
• Link 2020 Summer Olympics.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

External links

• Remove the stub tag.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Only some very minor issues that can be easily fixed. Placed on hold for seven days. Kosack (talk) 15:52, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

@Kosack: Addressed your comments, thanks for the thorough review. Kees08 (Talk) 19:00, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Nice work. One last point, Guamanian should be unlinked as nationalities are mentioned in WP:OVERLINK as being unnecessary links. This will also clear any issue with two links in a row. Kosack (talk) 19:06, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

TIL. Thanks, done Kees08 (Talk) 19:11, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

Happy to promote to GA. Kosack (talk) 19:17, 4 March 2018 (UTC)