Talk:René Jalbert

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Monado in topic Tone

Tone

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What this guy did is outstanding, but I think the tone is a bit over the top. WP 10:22, 14 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

  • It seems fine to me. It's a straightforward description of a single incident. There's no need to write, "Reporters reported that Jalbert talked to the gunman for four straight hours," is there? Monado (talk) 20:50, 12 January 2013 (UTC)Reply