Talk:Renata Carvalho

Renata Carvalho was nominated as a Media and drama good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 23, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review

Latest comment: 7 months ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Unsuccessful. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:50, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Renata Carvalho/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: GnocchiFan (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 00:49, 23 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

This is a quickfail. Unfortunately, it's just not long enough to be a Good Article at about 450 words.

Some specific feedback:

"Vastly positive" reviews is too much to say in wikivoice. Maybe a bit more about that work (as she wrote it) and some quotes of reception?
I recommend reading WP:CINS to fix some minor comma issues.
Adding more critical reception of her work would help with the length issue. It'd also prevent a WP:PROSELINE from forming.

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