Talk:Reproductive biology

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Chiswick Chap in topic Article not needed

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Hello. I have a couple suggestions for this article. When explaining testosterone, I think it would be beneficial to explain what testosterone's specific roles are in the male reproductive system. This could also be done for estrogen as well. I also think explaining or cite linking spermatogonia would be beneficial to readers as well, since many probably do not what this is exactly. There's also just small grammatical errors I saw when reading your article. I don't think a comma is needed here, "These hormones are secreted by endocrine glands, and spread to different tissues in the human body." Also, a comma should be used in this sentence as well after the word systems and before including, "There are two reproductive systems including the male and female, which contain different organs from one another." Other than that, good work!Patronus07 (talk) 17:57, 6 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

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I see that a class has expanded this article, but this article really is not needed. It doesn't cover anything that can't be, or isn't already, covered in the Reproductive system article, and that article is where this page used to redirect to.

I will contact WP:Biology and WP:Anatomy about weighing in on this matter. Flyer22 Reborn (talk) 21:15, 9 April 2017 (UTC)Reply