Talk:Residente o Visitante/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 14:49, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

1. In the "Recording" section, please write Puerto Rico, Miami, Florida

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 11:10, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

1. In the "Length" section, please use {{duration}}

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 11:10, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

1. The "singles" needs to follow WP:ALBUMS#Spanish

• I'm a little confused, what do you want me to change about it? Basilisk4u (talk) 15:01, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Lead

1. Please use {{lang-en}} for the English translation of the album

 Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

 Done Not sure what the purpose of the template is though. Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Of course not because you are a Spanish-speaking user, users like myself do not understand Spanish at the level you may know. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:18, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

No I mean I had a translation for the title already, and the lang-en template does not seem to change anything. It looks exactly the same as it did before I used the template. Basilisk4u (talk) 17:47, 24 June 2012 (UTC)

1. released on April 24, 2007, by Sony BMG. - this condradicts what the infobox states "Sony BMG U.S. Latin". Which one is it?

 Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Recorded in various countries as the follow up to the duo's debut album Calle 13 - infobox states Puerto Rico and Florida, which are both in the United States, which other countries was it recorded in? Also Calle 13 needs to have the year of release in parenthesis, like so Calle 13 (2005).

I can't find a source that says the exact countries it was recorded, I just know that it was recorded while the band was traveling on tour. Any suggestions? Basilisk4u (talk) 15:01, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

So why does the infobox says that it was recorded in various countries? Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:28, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

I have changed it. I don't have a hard copy of the album, but the band's other albums say all the places they recorded, so hopefully I can get my hands on one at some point and add it in. Basilisk4u (talk) 03:50, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

1. The album features numerous guest appearances - what's the exact number?

Do you mean every guest musician or every guest vocalist? The album has four guest vocalists, not counting their sister PG-13 as she is a frequent collaborator. As for the people who play an instrument on the album, I do not know. Basilisk4u (talk) 15:01, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

What's that section supposed to convey to the reader? The word "numerous" is not very encyclopedic and vague so the number of vocalist who are a guest musician would be preferred. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:28, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

I have put the number of guests who are explicitly mentioned with the tracklisting, which is six. Basilisk4u (talk) 16:34, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Residente o Visitante debuted at number one on the Billboard Top Latin Albums chart - needs to say the country the chart is from, ...debuted at number one on the US Billboard Top Latin Albums chart.

 Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:18, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Recording

1. Residente o Visitante was recorded in various countries, as the band was on tour during the making of the album. - again which ones?

 Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

I have addressed this issue above. Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Residente explained that the group did not feel pressure to compete with the success of Calle 13, and felt that the recording of Residente o Visitante was a smoother process than the first - the word "pressure" needs to be in past-tense tone or it should be rewritten to Residente explained that the group did not feel any pressure to compete with the success...

 Not done Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Lyrics

1. Delink United States per WP:COMMONWORD

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Wikilink immigration as its the central theme of "Pal Norte" making the subject relevant to the article

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Delink La Mala Rodriguez, you have already linked her name in the previous two sections

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Wikilink satire uncommon word

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Delink reggaeton you have already linked the music genre in the first sub section of this article

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. The album's first single or The album's lead single?

 Done It is the lead single. Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

1. displacing Jennifer Lopez's Spanish album Como Ama una Mujer and on the Billboard 200 at number 52, selling about 12,000 copies in its first week delink Spanish language and italicize Billboard like so Billboard 200

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Link Billboard Rap Albums

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. In Argentina, the album was certified gold by Argentine Chamber of Phonograms and Videograms Producers - also the lead as gold in upper case, please be consistent here. Secondly, you need to add (CAPIF) at the end of this sentence.

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Link Billboard Latin Rhythm Airplay

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Be consistent on the way you spell Hot Latin Songs (Billboard Latin Songs)
2. The fourth and final single was "Un Beso de Desayuno", which did not chart. - ", which failed to chart" sounds better

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

1. Stylus Magazine does not need to be italicized because it is an online magazine not a printed source

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

1. He praised Residente's rapping on the record who? Please note Casillas as the commentary reviewer

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 15:14, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

1. Needs a source for writing credits, preferably Allmusic or the album's liner notes would be great

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 21:48, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Chart positions

1. Billboard 200 needs to be italicize

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 21:48, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

1. Why didn't you link Top Rap Albums?

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 21:48, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

1. The year-end charts for Top Latin Albums needs to be delinked as you have already linked it in the chart positions section

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 21:48, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

References

1. FN#1 wikilink Allmusic and Rovi Corporation

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#3 wikilink Mortimer Zuckerman

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#4 be consistent in weather or not you provide publishers for printed newspapers. In this case add Tribune Company

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#5 wikilink Chicago Tribune

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#6 wikilink Orlando Sentinel

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#12 wikilink Billboard and Prometheus Global Media

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#13 DO NOT SHOUT "SONIDOS LATINOS" needs to be written "Sonidos Latinos", wikilink Newsday

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#14 do not italicize Reuters as it is an online news agency and not a printed source and link Thomson Reuters along with the source

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#17 is a dead link

Really? It seems to be working fine for me. Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

He meant the link to the article about Residente o Visitante succeeding Jennifer Lopez not working. I replaced it with the link on the week it happened on the Billboard website. Erick (talk) 18:13, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Awesome! Thanks a lot. Basilisk4u (talk) 19:14, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#25 do not italicize Stylus Magazine per above

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#26 link Philadelphia Media Network

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#27 publisher? (Michael Cohen)

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#31 link USA Today and Gannett Company

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

1. FN#32 do not italicize Gannett Company per FN#25 and FN#14

 Done Basilisk4u (talk) 16:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

Putting the article  On hold for seven days to fix up these minor issues. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:49, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I am recovering from surgery so please forgive me if my responses are delayed, but I am getting to work! :) Basilisk4u (talk) 15:01, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Can you fix the remaining issues with the lead per above? Once you have done this I will begin a ref check. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:24, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have fixed the issues with the lead now! Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Thanks! Basilisk4u (talk) 16:35, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

I have tagged what you have not done yet. Please fix the last issues. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 11:57, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Just some quick notes: the language template is not required. WP:CAPS is the actual guideline, not WP:ALBUMCAPS as it's only a suggested style. Erick (talk) 21:52, 8 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for letting me know I will ignore the capitalization for foreign articles. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:24, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Second look

• "Recorded in various countries as the follow up to the duo's debut album" - can you elaborate more?
• Delink Africa (lead)
• Delink Africa (recording)
• Delink Spain (recording)
• Delink Argentina (music)
• Delink Los Angeles Times (Critical reception)
• Delink Tango del Pecado (awards)

Please fix these issues before passing. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 19:56, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have fixed these all. I elaborate more on the recording later in the first paragraph. Basilisk4u (talk) 22:40, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing this interesting article! Passing, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 22:51, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch for the review! Basilisk4u (talk) 22:53, 27 June 2012 (UTC)