Talk:Rhythm of Love (Kylie Minogue album)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:26, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This article is very large; I will start reviewing today, though it may take a few days. Hope things go great with this and your life in general though! --K. Peake 13:26, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Remove venue parameter as that is for live recordings
• Replace hlist with bullet points in the infobox
• WP:OVERLINK of Peter Waterman Entertainment under label
• "to be recorded by Australian singer Kylie Minogue; it was released in" → "by Australian singer Kylie Minogue. It was released in"
• "in the creating and arranging" → "in the writing and production"
• "were the primary producers of the album, along with" → "were the primary producers along with"
• "and collaborations including" → "and collaborations, including"
• "The album is a musical departure" → "Rhythm of Love is a musical departure"
• Target bubblegum pop to Bubblegum music
• Target music critics to Music journalism
• "who complimented it as her best work" → "being complimented as her best work"
• "It was not as commercially successful as her" → "The album was not as commercially successful as Minogue's"
• "in the UK." → "in the UK, reaching number nine on the UK Albums Chart." with the wikilink
• "third top-ten studio album," → "third top 10 album," per MOS:NUM
• "number 10 four months after its release. It also peaked in the top twenty in" → "number 10, while also attaining top 20 positions in"
• "Rhythm of Love spawned four singles—" → "Four accompanying singles were released—" with the target
• "peaked inside the top ten" → "peaked inside the top 10"
• "first thirteen releases inside the top 10 in" → "their first 13 releases reach the top 10 in"
• "for the album included" → "for Rhythm of Love included"
• "controversial music videos and continued" → "controversial music videos, which continued" with the wikilink
• "Minogue promoted the album with her" → "Minogue further promoted it with her"
• "which travelled to Australia" → "travelling to Australia"
• "in the UK for the first time in 2015," → "in the UK in 2015,"
• Remove wikilink on UK Albums Chart

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 05:22, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Background

• "from her character" → "from her character of"
• "in the film" → "for that year's film"
• "who suffers through" → "that suffers through"
• Wikilink Principal photography
• "of her second album" → "of Minogue's second studio album"
• Add release year of the album in brackets
• were commercial successful[6][7] but received" → "were commercially successful,[6][7] though received"
• "Countdown awards show in" → "Countdown Awards ceremony in"
• "in September 1989," → "during September 1989,"
• "and Neighbours co-star Jason Donovan over" → "and Neighbours co-star, Jason Donovan, over"
• "released to raise funds" → "that was released to raise funds"
• Wikilink famine relief
• "it was the" → "the song was the"
• "the ninth biggest-selling single of 1989." → "the ninth best-selling single of 1989 in the United Kingdom." with the target switched

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 05:23, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Recording and production

• "the SAW producers struggled to" → "SAW struggled to"
• "who still embraced their" → "who still embraced the trio's"
• "in her next album." → "for her next album."
• "on from her" → "on from Minogue's"
• Minogue commenting on the writing process. → Minogue commenting on the album's writing process.
• "in three hours" → "within three hours"
• "in March." → "in March 1990."
• "SAW tried to" → "For the album, SAW tried to"
• Rather than having PWL with the explanation when hovered over, change to Pete Waterman Limited (PWL)
• "familiar with the genre and"" → "familiar with club music and" with the target
• "They also had to" → "SAW also had to"
• Target Roland 909 to Roland TR-909
• "said Aitken." → "said Aitken of creating the sound."
• "in late July" → "during late July 1990"
• "many visual ideas[20]" → "many visual ideas,[20]"
• "her 1989 studio album Like a Prayer." → "her fourth studio album Like a Prayer (1989)."
• "producers other than the SAW producers,." → "producers other than SAW,"
• [27][21] should be put in numerical order
• "According to Pete Waterman," → "According to Waterman,"
• "In March, she" → "In March 1990, she"
• [28][21] should be put in numerical order
• "Minogue said." → "Minogue said of his input."

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 05:23, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

• "a departure from" → "marking a departure from"
• "bubblegum pop music of her" → "bubblegum pop of Minogue's" with the target
• "instrumentation from saxophone" → "instrumentation, which includes saxophone"
• "mutated house beat,"" → "mutated house beat"," for consistency
• "said the album" → "stated Rhythm of Love"
• "of its tracks" → "of the tracks"
• "thumping drums."" → "thumping drums"."
• "said the album is a" → "said the album is"
• "The opening track "Better the Devil You Know" is" → "The opening track, "Better the Devil You Know", is"
• "influences in which Minogue" → "influences, in which Minogue"
• "The SAW producers wrote the song" → "SAW wrote the song"
• [36][21] should be put in numerical order
• Target samples to Sampling (music)
• "and said it has laid" → "and said it may have laid"
• "tries to get someone" → "tries to get a man"
• Why are the lyrics referred to as lines?
• [36][33] should be put in numerical order
• "a more mature lyrical content." → "shows more mature lyrical content from Minogue." on the audio sample text
• "to earlier work by" → "to the earlier work of"
• "Minogue's previous album" → "Minogue's previous studio album"
• Add release year of the album in brackets
• [39][36] should be put in numerical order
• "where she is scared her secrets" → "with Minogue being scared that her secrets"
• "cymbal crashes[36] and" → "cymbal crashes,[36] and"
• "which was written and composed by" → "written and composed by" to avoid confusion
• "noted, "The World Still Turns", the album's first song" → "noted that "The World Still Turns", the first song on Rhythm of Love"
• Target ballad to Sentimental ballad
• "sings she is surprised to" → "sings about being surprised to"
• Wikilink electric guitars
• Target rhythmic to Rhythm
• "who was uncredited." → "who is uncredited."
• "is a Saturday Night Fever-influenced dance song that has" → "is a dance song influenced by the soundtrack to 1977 film Saturday Night Fever that has" with the wikilink
• "An ode to long-distance relationship," → "An ode to long-distance relationships,"
• "Hutchence, saying" → "Hutchence, saying:"
• "Jeremy Mark found the merry tune" → "Mark found the merry tune"
• "is reminiscent of" → "to be reminiscent of Madonna's"
• "the album's closing track," → "Rhythm of Love's closing track,"
• "Ian Wade noted its similarities" → "Wade noted its similarities"

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 06:51, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Artwork and release

• Wikilink music video as well as "Step Back in Time" on the img main text and end with a full-stop
• "designed the album with designer" → "handled the design for Rhythm of Love with designer"
• "in Los Angeles in October;" → "within Los Angeles in October 1990;"
• "six-page spread in" → "six-page spread for"
• "new image;" → "new image,"
• "it's coming out!"." → "it's coming out!""
• "on 12 November 1990 by" → "on 12 November by"
• [23] should solely be at the end of the sentence before the other two refs
• "and 1991: an Australasian Tour was released" → "and 1991, with an Australasian Tour being released"
• Wikilink bonus tracks per MOS:LINK2SECT
• "this edition was later" → "the edition was later"
• Mention when the edition to promote "Shocked" was released
• "by PWL[51][52] and was re-released" → "by PWL,[51][52] late being re-released"
• "in 1993 and 1995,[53][54] and PWL reissued" → "in 1993 and 1995, respectively,[53][54] while PWL reissued" with the wikilink
• Introduce Let's Get to It as Minogue's fourth studio album and put the release year in brackets
• "released in Japan" → "released across Japan"
• "It peaked at" → "The compilation album peaked at"
• "and sold 7,330 copies," → "and has sold 7,330 copies,"
• "The same compilation was released" → "Kylie's Remixes: Vol. 2 was later released"
• "along with Minogue's studio albums Kylie (1988), Enjoy Yourself (1989), and Let's Get to It (1991)," → "along with Enjoy Yourself, Let's Get to It, and Minogue's debut studio album Kylie (1988),"
• Mention the initially proposed release date since you have mentioned the postponed one
• Target vinyl to Phonograph record
• Target CD to Compact disc
• "these albums had been re-released in the United Kingdom." → "they had been re-released in the UK."
• [62][61] should be put in numerical order
• "peaked at number ninety-six on the UK Albums Chart on" → "peaked at number 86 on the UK Albums Chart for" with the wikilink
• "that was later released on the Australia-only" → "before ultimately being released on Minogue's Australia-only"

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 06:55, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Promotion

• "the release of Enjoy Yourself and" → "the release of Enjoy Yourself, and"
• "The single "Shocked" and its music video" → ""Shocked" and its music video" with the wikilink
• "February to March 1991." → "February to March of 1991."
• "Minogue said;" → "Minogue said,"
• "worn in the tour" → "worn for the tour"

Singles

• "during the" → "during her" on the img main text and make sure to end with a full-stop
• This performance needs to be mentioned in the prose or else the pic is not relevant
• "The album spawned four singles," → "Rhythm of Love spawned four singles,"
• Wikilink lead single
• Remove wikilink on "Better the Devil You Know"
• "Its accompanying music video was" → "An accompanying music video was"
• "in two days in early April." → "over two days in early April of that year."
• "The video caused controversy for its sexual tone" → "The video's sexual tone caused controversy"
• [40][24][72] should be put in numerical order
• "number-two single," → "number two single on the UK Singles Chart," with the wikilink
• "It also peaked in" → "It further peaked within"
• Remove wikilink on "Step Back in Time"
• Change the Australia position to only mentioning the peak since the debut is not backed up and target Australian Singles Chart to ARIA Charts

Added another source about the debut position. Damian Vo (talk) 07:32, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

That is fine, though I did some very brief copy editing there. --K. Peake 11:32, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• "It had a similar run on the UK Singles Chart," → "The song experienced similar performance on the UK Singles Chart,"
• "It was her second" → ""Step Back in Time" became Minogue's second"
• Remove wikilink on Los Angeles
• "the single's release—Minogue's first" → "the single's release; this marked her first"
• "stereo and continues with clips of Minogue" → "stereo, and continues with clips of her"
• "and the back-up dancers are also drive through" → "and the dancers also drive through"
• "in red Cadillac car." → "in a red Cadillac car."
• "to be the follow-up to" → "to be the follow-up single to"
• Remove wikilink on "What Do I Have to Do"
• "as the third single." → "as the third single from Rhythm of Love."
• "A mostly black-and-white music video was" → "An accompanying music video that is set mostly in black-and-white was"
• "in December 1990." → "during December 1990."
• "Minogue appears in" → "In the video, Minogue appears in"
• "irons clothes wearing a" → "irons clothes while wearing a"
• "Her sister Dannii Minogue appears" → "Kylie's sister Dannii Minogue appears"
• "a feud between them." → "a feud between the two of them."
• "later became Minogue's boyfriend," → "later became Kylie Minogue's boyfriend," per MOS:SAMESURNAME
• "cameo role in the video." → "cameo role in the music video."
• "in the United Kingdom and the programmes aired a" → "in the UK, with the programmes airing a"
• "version of the video." → "version of it."
• "to miss the top-ten in" → "to miss the top 10 in"
• "it also broke" → "the song also broke"
• "It also peaked at" → "The song also peaked at"
• "becoming her third top-ten single" → "becoming Minogue's third top 10 single"
• Remove target on "Shocked"
• "which was chosen for release as the last single" → "which was released as the fourth and final single"
• Target Jazzi P to Pauline Bennett
• "at the Pinewood Studios, England, on 24 and 25 April." → "at the Pinewood Studios, Iver Health, on 24 and 25 April 1991." with the target
• [86][85] should be put in numerical order
• "the first thirteen releases inside the top 10." → "their first 13 releases chart inside the top 10."
• [78][76] should be put in numerical order

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 12:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Digital Spy should not be italicised at all
• "received generally positive reviews." → "was met with generally positive reviews from music critics." with the target
• Target average to Weighted arithmetic mean
• "In a three-stars-out-of-five review, Chris True of AllMusic considered" → "Chris True of AllMusic considered"
• "than Minogue's previous output," → "than either of Minogue's previous two releases,"
• "and termed it her" → "and termed the album her"
• "during the Stock Aitken Waterman years." → "during the SAW years."
• "towards the end. He cited" → "towards the end; he cited"
• "Jeremy Mark of Number One was impressed by the" → Mark was impressed by the album's"
• "Joe Sweeney of PopMatters said the album" → "Sweeney said the album"
• "and rated the album eight stars out of ten, higher than any of her other PWL albums." → "and rated the album higher than any of her other PWL albums."
• "Select's Andrew Harrison rated the album two out of five. He criticized her" → "Harrison criticized Minogue's"
• "receive a four-stars rating" → "receive a four-star rating"
• Wikilink Colin Larkin
• "classifying it as" → "with him classifying it as"
• Remove target on Classic Pop
• "In another review from the same publication," → "In a separate review for the same publication,"
• "and said the album is" → "and called the album"
• "based on the choice of singles and" → "due to the choice of singles, and"
• "Ernest Macias from Entertainment Weekly said" → "Ernest Macias from Entertainment Weekly said in 2018 that"

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 12:23, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Commercial performance

• Remove the img since it is not relevant
• "top-ten entry and" → "top 10 entry on the chart and"
• "It fell to number sixteen the following week and stayed in top twenty" → "The album fell to number 16 the following week, and stayed in the top 20"
• "the album re-entered the chart at number sixty-two" → "Rhythm of Love re-entered the chart at number 62"
• "Rhythm of Love was certified gold by the British Phonographic Industry" → "The album was certified gold by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI)"
• "for selling 100,000 copies." → "for selling 100,000 copies in the UK."
• "on the album chart on 28 October 1990," → "on the Irish Albums chart for 28 October 1990," with the target
• "debuted at number seventeen" → "debuted at number 17 on the ARIA Albums chart,"
• [96] should solely be at the end of the sentence
• "reached number thirteen the following week but later fell back." → "reached number 13 the following week but later fell down the chart."
• "the album peaked at number 10" → "it peaked at number 10 on the ARIA Albums chart"
• "top-ten studio album four months after its release." → "top 10 studio album four months after being released."
• "it was certified platinum by Australian Recording Industry Association" → "Rhythm of Love was certified platinum by the Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)"
• "selling 70,000 in the country." → "selling 70,000 copies in Australia."
• "on the charts at number thirty-six." → "on the NZ Top 40 Albums chart at number 36." with the target
• "at number forty-four on the charts there." → "at number 44 on Sverigetopplistan's album chart." with the wikilink
• "the album reached number twenty-six and stayed in the charts for ten weeks," → "Rhythm of Love reached number 26 and stayed on Promusicae's album chart for 10 weeks," with the target
• Remove wikilink on Productores de Música de España in the part about the certification
• "for selling 50,000 copies." → "for selling 50,000 copies in Spain."
• Remove the Netherlands position since it is too low to be notable in prose
• "at number twenty-five and later became the seventy-ninth best-selling album of the year" → "at number 25 and later became the 79th best-selling album of 1991"
• "it peaked at number thirty-two on" → "the album peaked at number 32 on"
• Remove wikilink on Oricon Albums Chart

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 12:31, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

• The first track listing should have track listing in the headline

Do you mean in the template? Damian Vo (talk) 12:42, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Yes, see recent GA California Sunrise for example; understood? --K. Peake 12:59, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Got it. Damian Vo (talk) 13:06, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• included guest vocals → includes guest vocals
• but was uncredited. → who is uncredited.

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 13:06, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Personnel

• Adapted from the album's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the album's liner notes.
• Wikilink Kylie Minogue

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 12:43, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Charts

Weekly charts

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION
• Shouldn't Music & Media be in brackets for the Irish Albums chart?

Year-end charts

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 13:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Certifications

• Retitle to Certifications and sales
• See MOS:TABLECAPTION

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 13:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Release history

• See MOS:TABLECAPTION
• Distributor(s) → Label(s)
• Identify Mushroom Records as Mushroom instead

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 13:07, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

See also

• Good

References

• It seems confusing to me that some of the book sources are not cited as sources while many are; can you explain this?

I moved all the book/magazine sources to the "Sources" section. The remaining footnotes are websites and media notes only. Damian Vo (talk) 14:19, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Copyvio score looks good at 24.8%

Footnotes

• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool

Some of the footnotes in the "Weekly charts" section are template-based, so they might have a different format than the others. I archived them all just in case. Damian Vo (talk) 14:19, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

• Incorrect spacing with ref 1
• Cite Stuff.co.nz as publisher instead for ref 13 and target to Stuff (website)
• Target PWL to Pete Waterman Entertainment on ref 23
• Remove or replace ref 25 since SongFacts is unreliable
• Cite Digital Spy as publisher instead for ref 31
• Target Emap Metro to Ascential on ref 33
• WP:OVERLINK of Smash Hits on refs 34 and 45
• WP:OVERLINK of Arts Centre Melbourne on ref 44
• WP:OVERLINK of Ascential on ref 45
• WP:OVERLINK of WEA on ref 54
• WP:OVERLINK of PML on refs 55, 60 and 62
• WP:OVERLINK of Oricon on ref 57
• Target Mushroom to Mushroom Records on ref 59
• WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on refs 59, 64 and 90
• Target Cherry Red to Cherry Red Records on ref 62
• WP:OVERLINK of Official Charts Company on ref 75
• Remove Hung Medien from refs 76 and 97
• Target Ultratop 50 to Ultratop on ref 77
• Remove irishcharts.ie from ref 78
• Remove the publisher from refs 104 and 105
• WP:OVERLINK of Music & Media on ref 106

All done. Damian Vo (talk) 14:36, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Sources

• Target PWL to Pete Waterman Entertainment

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 14:37, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

External links

• Swap the order

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 14:37, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold and good luck, as you have promoted other articles of Minogue's to GA before! --K. Peake 13:56, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I'll try my best. Thanks for taking the time to review. Damian Vo (talk) 04:01, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

@Damian Vo: Congratulations on this quick response, though one query I have is about the PWL acronym; it reads confusingly since the label is identified as Pete Waterman Entertainment, shouldn't it be referred to as Pete Waterman Limited since that was the label's name at the time? --K. Peake 16:51, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

I already changed them to Pete Waterman Limited based on your suggestion :D Damian Vo (talk) 07:28, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Damian Vo ✓ Pass now, good job on the quick response and sorry about the brief confusion mention above! --K. Peake 08:27, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

It's alright. Thank you for your thorough commentary <3 Damian Vo (talk) 09:22, 26 October 2020 (UTC)