Talk:Richard Thomas Alexander

Some content issues

Some content issues:

1. The layout should be made to conform to Wp:MOS and WP:MOSBIO. One issue I have noted is the frequent use of academic titles before people's names.
2. The article contains lots of information on other people that is not directly pertinent to the subject of this article (example: "Adler never received his A.B. degree, but so impressed the faculty he was allowed into graduate school to complete his doctorate in psychiatry").
3. The article contains lots of speculation that is not sourced to anything (examples: "It let him solidify some of his thoughts about teacher education, the concept of community, and curriculum theory" and "All of Alexander’s experiences thus far convinced him that a new type of teachers college was necessary to address the social issues of the day")

Hope this helps. --Guillaume2303 (talk) 16:45, 5 April 2012 (UTC)