Talk:Ricky Martin (1999 album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:40, 6 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Non-free use rationale for the image looks good.
• "announced recording" → "announced the recording"
• "consists dance-pop tracks" → "consists of dance-pop tracks"
• "encouraged Columbia Records decide" → "encouraged Columbia Records to decide"
• On "Spanish Eyes" → In "Spanish Eyes"
• Add a serial comma between "sultriness, tango and dance".
• Wikilink descargas for the readers who do not understand.

• I'm sorry but it was already wikilinked in its first usage. (In the sentence of "In "Spanish Eyes", Martin refers..." آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:13, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• "Czech Republic" → "the Czech Republic"
• "A same track list" – rephrase
• "in addition the" → "in addition to the"
• Add a comma after "autographed Ricky Martin CDs".
• Is it "Livin' La Vida Loca" (as in the lead) or "Livin' la Vida Loca"?

• It's "Livin' la Vida Loca", sorry for my mistake. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:27, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

• "They acclaimed" – rephrase
• "with additional" → "with an additional"
• "emphasizing on the fact" → "emphasizing the fact"
• Vulture.com should be formatted as Vulture.
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".

@Some Dude From North Carolina:  Done, thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 00:27, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

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