Talk:Ricochet (Faith No More song)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Grapple X in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:26, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
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- "replaced their previous guitar player Jim Martin and were dealing with the absence of keyboard" why did both of these happen?
- "Paris, and charted" -> "Paris. The single charted..."
- And link record chart.
- "had been fired" why?
- "Andy Wallace. Wallace had" repetitive.
- "close friend of Bottom's.[1][3] In" typo.
- " B-side" is there a link for this?
- Ref 16 SHOUTING.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:29, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks again for a prompt review. I've addressed the above concerns; regarding your first point I wasn't sure how much details to go into in the lead but have added a bit more information; I also expanded some further details on Martin's firing in the body too. Hope these changes look okay. Gʀᴀᴘᴘʟᴇ ˣ 18:54, 3 September 2021 (UTC)