Talk:Right Thoughts, Right Words, Right Action/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Aria1561 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
- Comments below:
- Citations in the lead and the infobox are unnecessary.
- Not done - I left in the citations for the genres. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Done - Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Too many short paragraphs in the "Singles" section.
- Done - Fixed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Twitter is largely considered unreliable.
- Done - Twitter sources removed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- On that point, the notes require a citation.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Done - Citations have been added for the notes. Aria1561 (talk) 14:28, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Expand the contraction "can't".
- Further explanation needed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- It would be nice if you added an image of the cover of the album under fair use.
- I believe the cover already has a fair use rationale within the image's "Summary" section. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Two dead links to the "Gaon" and the "Spotify" websites
- Done Gaon chart dead links fixed. The Spotify ref doesn't contain a dead link. It just requires you to sign in to the Spotify service. It should bring you to the album's streaming page once done. Aria1561 (talk) 13:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- All for now.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
- Passing, well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:51, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for reviewing this. :) Aria1561 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2015 (UTC)