Talk:Roads and freeways in metropolitan Phoenix/GA2

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• Regarding previous issues raised at last GAR - addressed - not sure why MTF has been slow about your map request. I left a note at the requests page...
  • • Thank you!

*1a) beelines for downtown? Not sure if that's formal...

• • • Fixed.
  • 1.4 - lost the C in Continuing, duplexing needs to be wikilinked
    • Fixed.
  • 2 - seems pointless to have (s) in the heading as there's only one
    • Fixed.
  • 3 - extensions of routes should probably be merged with the route in section 1
    • I don't understand what this means.
    • You should probably merge the description of the route with the description in sec 1 if it's just an extension of the route and not a whole new route.
    • I'd rather not merge the "Future" piece about Loop 202 with the "Existing" piece because it's not in existence yet -- and I do specify which particular piece of the Loop 202 that I discuss in each section (Future and Existing). Please let me know if this is absolutely neccessary for GA and eventually FA status, if so then I'll find a way to fix it. Thanks. Rko202 (talk) 19:31, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
  • 4.4 - Interstate 10 Reliever - is that the official name?
    • It used to be, but I guess it was dropped. Fixed.
  • 6 - not sure that this deserves its own section.
    • Fixed.
  • 7 - spell out 30
    • Fixed.
• 1b) - the article starts a bit abruptly.
  • • I'm not sure how to fix this.
      • Just add a sentence to the start of the article sort of introducing the topic. You jump right into the topic with the first sentence.
        • I tried to find a GA to look at as a model, but they all seem to do this.
          • Just write a sentence introducing the topic.
            • Fixed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rko202 (talk • contribs) 03:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
  • 5 - not comfortable with list in a GA. Maybe make it a table at least, if it isn't converted to prose?
    • Fixed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rko202 (talk • contribs) 02:22, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
• 2 - there are entire sections missing sources.
  • • Fixed.
      • Okay, but they need to be inline refs.
        • Which in particular? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rko202 (talk • contribs) 01:49, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
          • All of them. You cannot have external links in the article; you must use ref tags. --Rschen7754 (T C) 02:01, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
            • Fixed. Rko202 (talk) 02:31, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
              • Okay, but the old external links need to be removed. --Rschen7754 (T C) 02:48, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
                • Fixed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rko202 (talk • contribs) 03:09, 13 October 2008 (UTC)
• 3 - a history section may be necessary. Currently a lot of it is briefly explained in the lead...
  • • Much of the history is covered in the Funding section.
• 4-5 - pass
• 6 - again, need a map, but I don't know what's up with MTF on that one...
  • Found one for temporary use from the commons. Rko202 (talk) 02:55, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

On hold This article needs a bit of cleanup before GA and especially for ACR and FA. --Rschen7754 (T C) 18:29, 7 October 2008 (UTC)

• Please let the reviewer cross stuff out. --Rschen7754 (T C) 19:10, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

Passing. I'm not completely confident in the structure, but this is an unconventional article in general (as it's not on a highway like the vast majority of USRD articles). You may need to reevaluate it again at ACR or FAC. --Rschen7754 (T C) 03:59, 13 October 2008 (UTC)