Talk:Rob Pelinka/GA1

GA Review

At this time, I am going to fail this, because I feel that this article needs a lot of work yet to be a GA.

• Citation #5 is blank.
• Kobe Bryant section has a fact tag on it.
• Education and Honors should be converted into prose.
  • By that same token, some facts are both pointed out and discussed twice, plus with the way it's written the lead seems like the high school and college paragraph rather then a lead.
• Can the Maggette and Gordon sections be expanded? If not try to make it so that there's not a bunch of two sentence paragraphs.

Wizardman 20:06, 28 June 2008 (UTC)