Talk:Robert Ivy

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Smtology in topic Neutral Point of View - Language

Conflict of Interest

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Smtology (talk) 06:33, 14 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Neutral Point of View - Language

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"Career" section makes non-neutral and non-factual claims about Ivy's accomplishments. Additionally, some of the content here isn't about Ivy himself but rather the AIA. See for example: "Under Ivy's leadership since 2011, the AIA is transforming to serve the architecture profession in the 21st century. He is repositioning the AIA from its rich legacy into a proactive, responsive, and influential organization. Chief among his and the organization's goals are heightening public awareness of the value and relevance of all architects."

  • "AIA transforming to serve the architecture profession in the 21st century" is not objective/factual. Also not about Ivy himself.
  • "rich legacy" is not neutral language
  • "proactive, responsive, and influential organization" is not neutral language
  • "is positioning," from a grammatical point of view, does not describe an accomplishment.
  • "Chief among his and the organization's goals are heightening public awareness of the value and relevance of all architects." is not written as a fact.

Smtology (talk) 06:43, 14 November 2016 (UTC)Reply