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Reason for hangon: I am the owner of the website in question. I give permission to use it. How do I do this officially.XanderKing (talk) 05:21, 7 April 2009 (UTC)Robert LiparuloReply

Please see Wikipedia:Requesting copyright permission. Please do not re-add the text until it has been verified that this text was in fact released under the GFDL or a compatible license. Regards SoWhy 10:15, 7 April 2009 (UTC)Reply

Breathy prose reads like it was written by a publicist

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This entire piece needs rewriting because it's breathy promotional copy, not an encyclopedia article. 173.49.137.17 (talk) 02:53, 13 May 2013 (UTC)Reply