Talk:Robert Owen
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editHello. I don't think this photo can be of Robert Owen, who would have been in his seventies when photography proper came in. It looks more like Thomas Carlyle.
Regards, Ian
- Actually I think it's an engraving. It came from the University of Texas collection; they cite Helmolt, H.F., ed. History of the World. New York: Dodd, Mead and Company, 1902 as their source. (I tend to trust them being an alum. *grin*) - Hephaestos|§ 14:01, 13 Mar 2004 (UTC)
About the "Portrait of Robert Owen (1771 - 1858) by John Cranch, 1845". The article on John Cranch states that he died in 1816. How did he paint this? He didn't say. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.206.22.214 (talk) 21:23, 15 February 2010 (UTC)
hi but i dont know what you are talking about but that does not look anything at all like thomas carlye and it is robert owen !!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.119.121.4 (talk) 23:27, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
Day of dying
editEncyclopædia Britannica in hebrew claims that Owen died in November 7th. SHIMONSHA
- That is probably a typo on their part. I've consulted several authorities and they agree he died on 17 November 1858. Pinkville
NPOV
editI was looking for a factual article about the causes of failure of Owen's experiments at New Harmony. The author of this article (1911 Brittanica or whomever) clearly has a sympathetic view of Owen's beliefs.
The article is HIGHLY apologetic and forgiving about Owen's failures, and far too laudatory and lavish in praise otherwise. I know little more about the man than I learned in high school years ago (which was in itself fairly little) so can someone with more knowledge clean up a mite? No they can't.
216.46.98.249 21:43, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
NPOV
Robert Owen did have faults the main was that in America his new city was abused and the people that moved to work there where not the industrious people who appreciated his benevolence. Robert Owen failed in the American New Harmony because he did not see the problems a less than motivated workforce would produce. The good of principals were let down by the reality of Humans trying to get something for nothing. The move to succeed in the USA by UK companies still remains difficult and Owen did not expect the inherent differnces and therfore could not plan and foresee the relocation problems as it had not been undertaken before. Owen must have believed as the formulae had been succesful in New Lanark it would have no problems in the USA.
By the time he realised the project was flawed it was too late. But the work he undertook laid the foundations for many good things that had would not have been undertaken so quickly and showed that the inhuman excess the Industrial Revolution produced were not required for business to prosper and that employees should be treated as human beings. A new philosphy that made the world of employment as we know it today and we all must look to as a touchstone for the coming Globalisation producing the world-wide comglomerates who seem set on shaping the world and its workers to fit their strategies.
Though flawed the work done by Robert Owen improved the workers conditions then and now. We perhaps need another Roberty Owen faults and all to stop us falling into the Globalisation revolution without any alternative.
NPOV! The article reads like a paean to the man. Excerpts:
"In all these plans Owen obtained the most gratifying success." " According to the unanimous testimony of all who visited it, the results achieved by Owen appeared singularly good."
It also is a bit quaint and outmoded; as 216.46.98.249 pointed out, it sounds like it could be from the 1911 Brittanica. I mean, "This population, thus committed to his care, Owen now set himself to elevate and ameliorate." Really? Not to mention there are a few first-person references in the article ("As we have said,...").
In consideration of these things, I'm marking the article POV-Check. Chris 19:34, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
- You could try rewriting the parts you think are slanted. Tom Harrison Talk 19:40, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
- Yes, this article is a bit pious in tone and somewhat antiquated in style, as if it relies heavily on some old-fashioned hagiographical work. But it contains much useful info. I corrected the style a bit, linked "truck system", and added dates for the Truck Acts.pmr 11:05, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
Does anyone think this term here is a little subjective "crotchety, wrongheaded enthusiasts" 86.42.5.153 (talk) 21:33, 22 August 2009 (UTC)
Nationality
editMany European History textbooks call Owens Scottish. Anyone care to comment on the source for his Welsh nationality here? M. Luke Myers 02:22, 26 January 2006 (UTC)
According to Norton's The Revolutionary Era: 1789-1850 Owen's was born in Wales and bought a cotton mill in New Lanark, Scotland.
Indeed, Owen was born in Newtown, Powys and moved at the age of 10. He returned to Newtown at the end of his life and died there. There is a museum and statue to Owen in Newtown
So what was his nationality??
In "The History of Socialism in the 19th century", Owen's parents were both Welsh. He also called himself a Welshman in his written Westminster Review(1839).
Owen was born in Wales, married Caroline Dale, the daughter of Scottish textile manufacturer David Dale. Robert Owen eventually became the manager and part-owner of Scotland's New Lanark Mills, but his birthplace is in Wales, so he was a Welshman. Rosalina523 (talk) 19:10, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
New Harmony
editThe section on its formation is questionable given that the New Harmony Historical Society website (http://www.ulib.iupui.edu/KADE/newharmony/home.html) states it was originally a German Lutherian community which failed and was rescued; another useful resource for consideration of the validity of the content is Education in Robert Owen’s new society: the New Lanark institute and schools | infed.org user:ianguy
The Photo which is attached to this section is titled 'New Moral World', However it is the same photo that is used for the page on New Harmony. Which one is correct?
I believe this section needs a bit of a rewrite - the tone lacks neutrality: "Neither of them was a pauper experiment; but it must be said that the members were of the most motley description, many worthy people of the highest aims being mixed with viagrants, adventurers, and crotchety, wrongheaded enthusiasts, or in the words of Owen's son 'a heterogeneous collection of radicals... honest latitudinarians, and lazy theorists, with a sprinkling of unprincipled sharpers thrown in.'" --Vince 16:25, 10 April 2007 (UTC)
For your section on the Owen experiment at New Harmony, Indiana, you might want to consult wikipedia's article on New Harmony. You are accurate in stating that the utopian experiment failed; however, New Harmony was a significant center of scientific research due to the presence of Owen's sons and the scientists that Robert Owen brought to the community on the famous "Boatload of Knowledge." Additional information about the history of New Harmony can be found on a site maintained by the University of Southern Indiana: New Harmony Scientists, Educators, Writers & Artists --Gr1909 (talk) 22:47, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
--Owen bought the Indiana town, known at that time as Harmony, or Harmonie, from the Harmony Society, who relocated to Pennsylvania. The Owenite utopian community named it New Harmony.Rosalina523 (talk) 19:10, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Revisions
edit11/19/06 The article looked like a starstruck middle school student wrote it. The grammar, syntax, punctuation, etc. was atrocious and very archaic. I fixed most of the problem areas. You'll find that the original meanings are wholly intact; the old wording has simply been improved. --Smilingsuzy 21:19, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
~ Useful work, Smilingsuzy, but you seem to have "corrected" several spellings that are authorised by the Oxford English Dictionary. pmr 15:51, 6 January 2007 (UTC)
Labour vouchers
editI note that this article doesn't mention Owen's invention of labour vouchers. I'm not terribly familiar with Owen's treatment of them myself, so perhaps someone who is can add this information to the article (and also to the labour voucher article, which I have started as a stub). —Psychonaut 14:10, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
The article does mention the Truck Acts. These post-date Owen at New Lanark and the reference should not be in this article. In fact Owen favoured and operated a Truck/voucher system with vouchers redeemable in the Company Shop. So the point is misleading.
The feature of Owen's system was that (unusually for these schemes) his Shop offered good value. This fact was used by David Ricardo (as an MP) to oppose the Truck Acts. --172.201.138.248 17:33, 27 April 2007 (UTC)
Spiritualism
editThere is no mention in the article about the alleged authorship of the seven principles of spiritualism. Any reason for this? Is the S.N.U. website [1] proof enough for me to alter the article? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.141.141.236 (talk) 18:38, 24 February 2007
Richard Dale Owen
editMore information about Robert Owen's son Richard Dale Owen can be found at the following site:RICHARD OWEN --Gr1909 (talk) 22:38, 2 March 2008 (UTC)
Richard Dale Owen's wiki article has been recently updated as well; additional content on four of Owen's children, who immigrated to the United States, has been added to this article.Rosalina523 (talk) 19:10, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Cottage system
editThe article states that one of Owen's 'intellectual pillars' was his belief in the cottage system. No evidence is presented in support of this. Is there any? His achievement at New Lanark was to show that the factory system could be the basis of a decent life for working people, not to turn back to cottage-based production. If I am missing something, please fill the gap. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Numero60 (talk • contribs) 23:42, 6 December 2008 (UTC)
i think that it is very hard worded and hard to understand, i dont like this at all. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.3.164.4 (talk) 18:08, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
But I do. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.22.134.191 (talk) 10:19, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
No personal responsibility
editNo wonder that Antioch College, based on his principles, was an utter failure. 155.84.57.253 (talk) 20:12, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
Two points
edit1) The link to footnote 10 now seems to be [2] - but I can't see how to access 'Reflist 2' to change this;
2) There is a significant question to be asked - maybe it's been raised on other pages:and
The International Co-operative Alliance (ICA) uses the hyphenated forms of co-operation, co-operative, co-operator, co-op etc - including its own name.
(Notably - and confusingly, Google (and other web-based searches eg at the Chapters/Indigo catalogue) returns different results depending on the search term co-operation/cooperation. This makes for highly misleading literature/web searches for students and so on.
For convenience, I pronounce the unhyphenated form 'cooper -/- ation' rather than the etymological - and historically accurate pronunciation 'co -/- operation' to make the ambiguity in usage that is described below.)
Indeed, the US usage of the (unhyphenated) term 'cooperation' is ambiguous - as in 'thank-you for your cooperation' (as a cipher for 'your compliance is expected - or else there will be unpleasant, likely violent, consequences for you'). Worryingly for educators, and others, this also finds use in ambiguous terms such as 'getting your child to cooperate (with you)' as a cipher for 'getting your child to comply (with your demands)'.
(Notably - this is also the case in most dominant/dominating culture/capitalist publication and wider usage, where the unhyphenated form is used without discrimination as to these alternative meanings - something that the most recent versions of the Oxford English Dictionary, most regrettably, have decided upon - despite the contrary evidence.)
So my discussion point is:
Should Wikipedia use the ICA hyphenated forms of co-operation, co-operative, co-operator, co-op etc? I'd say yes. Views? None.
Ancestry
editThe article assigns Owen to the category Welsh people of Dutch descent, but doesn't provide a source. There is no mention of it in the biographical section of the article and no mention of it in his autobiography. EricWR (talk) 22:57, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
- The 1907 biography of Owen by Frank Podmore mentions a tenuous connection with Dutch labour colonies at Frederik's Oord. But I can see nothing about any Dutch ancestry. I think it is a mistake. Martinevans123 (talk) 23:08, 10 November 2015 (UTC)
What does "Socrates' general overview" of character refer to?
editI think that "Socrates' general overview" of character should be briefly spelled out in the article. I am a long-tenured professor of philosophy (specializing in Western Philosophy) and I don't know, off hand, what this refers to. And if I don't know I think it's a pretty sure bet that the vast majority of people won't know this either. I think the article could be improved if the writers and/or editors of this entry -- or anyone who knows what this refers to -- would briefly spell out what this means at the end of the paragraph where it is mentioned. Thank you for your attention to this matter. Radphilosophe
Incorrect links to a US senator from oklahoma named Robert Owen below
editI deleted two links, i suggest people be on the lookout for this name problem in the future. I moved his links to his page — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nathanielfirst (talk • contribs) 22:41, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
Additional citations needed
editI've found and added many of the missing citations to the article, and identified specific text with the "citations needed" note. You can help to improve this article by adding more of the missing citations from reliable sources. Rosalina523 (talk) 19:14, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
This claim seems pretty hard to believe. Perhaps it's a typo?
editThis sentence doesn't seem like it could possibly be true, just based on internal evidence:
"However, some of Owen's schemes displeased his partners, forcing him to arrange for other investors to buy his share of the business in 1813 for $800,000 (US)."
I believe that it should really read something like "..forcing him to arrange for other investors to buy his partner's share of the business..." It seems really unlikely that it was Owen's share that was bought out since, first, he found investors, including " Jeremy Bentham and William Allen, a well-known Quaker" who obviously agreed with his social philosophy and were apparently willing to accept reduced profits . In addition it seems like Owen continued to operate as the general manager, and continued to implement his social progress schemes, etc after the buy-out (eg instituting universal free education in Lanark in 1818).
I'd just change this to except for the fact that I am just going on internal evidence from the article itself, and common sense, not any independent knowledge of the facts of the situation.
There are three sentences in this article that seem very problematic.
The first sentence is obviously a quote from a very sympathetic source. It may very well be true, or at least partially true, but it is pretty hard to believe as stated. I'd recommend that it at least be set off in quote marks and a reference provided, with maybe some sort of a caution that the author was (one presumes) a strong partisan. Right now the sentance is simply in-line in the text, presented as objective fact, without even any supporting references.
"The manners of the children brought up under his system were beautifully graceful, genial and unconstrained; health, plenty, and contentment prevailed; drunkenness was almost unknown; and illegitimacy extremely rare."
The second sentence is less extreme, but I would guess, is just a continuation of the quote from the previous source, and ought to be handled the same way.
"Owen's relationship with the workers remained excellent, and all the operations of the mill proceeded with smoothness and regularity."
The third sentence is no doubt a continuation of the same quote, but suffers from the drawback of being obviously untrue, as shown from internal evidence provided in the next paragraph of the article. Far from being a commercial success, Owen's partners wished to sell their shares in the business and Owen had to find new partners who were willing to accept subnormal rates of returns on their investment.
"Furthermore, the business was a commercial success." — Preceding unsigned comment added by DlronW (talk • contribs) 23:14, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
should there be any reference to Marx here?
editIt's interesting to note that his opinion of Owen was high relative to his opinion of the other utopian socialists (not that everything has to be about Marx, but on the page of a fairly obscure socialist, surely the high opinion of the world's best-known or second-best-known socialist should be mentioned).
Culling an additional reading link.
editHi, I'm removing Southgate, Troy. Robert Owen: Welsh Radical & Co-operative Pioneer from the additional reading. It's not a primary source, and doesn't seem to add much seems like an opinion piece from a website that advocates "Race Separatism". I don't think this is very useful to link. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.182.149.165 (talk) 03:52, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
Robert Owen, a Scotsman
editRobert Owen, a Scotsman, who lived in Braxfield House, Lanark, in early eighteen hundreds, is not this Robert Owen, a Welshman.[1] This note will assist editors researching these items.--Dthomsen8 (talk) 20:34, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
The article about Braxfield House does not mention Robert Owen's nationality. The Robert Owen who lived there is the same Robert Owen as the subject of this Wiki article. RedKite (talk) 07:19, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
The last two paragraphs in the "Philosophy and Influence" section are in really bad shape. Perhaps they should be removed altogether?
editThis is them:
"Perhaps one of Robert Owen's most rememberable idea is his silent monitor method. Owen opposed to common corporal punishment, therefore, to have some form of discipline he developed the "silent monitor". In his mills, he would hang a four-sided block each displaying a different color representing the behavior of the employee. The color for poor performance was black and he believed it aligned with the Scottish term 'black-affronted' meaning to be embarrassed. While the opposite being white to symbolize meritorious conduct. His strategy was successful as employees at the time cared about maintain a good relationship with Owen in order to leave a good impression on him, since he took a different approach to employees' regulation. This idea supports his overall thought that human nature is molded for better or worse by the environment. Owen had a significant impact on British socialism as well on unionism that helped him set an example for others. That no matter the background one has whether rich or poor one can always change the status quo and be unalike anyone before.
Owen grew to be known as a utopian and his works clearly reflect. He took a step closer to socialism defining that it will be the next safe and fair treatment of society's labor. Although himself would be considered a bourgeoisie member his relationship with the high class was often complicated. He fought do pass legislation that benefit workers. He was mainly responsible for the Factory Act of 1819.[citation needed] He defended the idea that the government should employ the poor villages. His ideas mostly supported socialist ideas for which capitalist and government where not a big fan, thus his utopian or socialist did not carry on for much time in Britain or in the United States, where to tried to create his own society." Odbwu0c (talk) 13:21, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
- I agree. The paragraphs add nothing to the article, so please feel free to edit or remove them. The whole of the "Philosophy and Influence" section, including it's sub-sections, is a jumble and would benefit from a complete overhaul - quite a large task I suspect. RedKite (talk) 08:32, 15 August 2022 (UTC)