Talk:Robert Thomas (ice hockey)
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Nova Crystallis in topic GA Review
Robert Thomas (ice hockey) has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: May 26, 2020. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
- "As the youngest player on the Blues' roster, Thomas won the Stanley Cup as a member of the team in 2019." Remove "as a member of the team", it's already stated with him being on the roster. Done
- Ref 2 doesn't say his dad is a chef. Done
- "under 16" Dash needed. Done
- Link Fortnite and link Jordan Kyrou earlier. Done
- "attend Canada men's national junior ice hockey team U20 Team Summer Development Camp " A "the" can be added after the "and".
- What and? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:07, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
- Err, I mean "attend". Nova Crystallis (Talk) 16:47, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
- What and? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 15:07, 26 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Blues prospects Jordan Kyrou" Singular. Done
- Missing a dot for the ellipsis in the player profile quote. Done
That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)