Talk:RoboCop (song)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 27 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Add a short description to the top of the article.
  • "due to having wrote" – reword
  • "from 1990 film" → "from the 1990 film"
  • Remove the comma after "recorded in Los Angeles".
  • Per MOS:TIES, articles tackling "American" subjects or topics related to it such be written using American English. I have been told that this also applies to songs, albums, and overall any type of music created by American musicians. As a result, I would suggest changing the following:
  • "The orchestra were" → "The orchestra was"
  • "Cancelled" → "Canceled"
  • "modeller" → "modeler"
  • "favourite" → "favorite"
  •   Done but I did know which was the American spelling of this and someone else had actually added this fact in then I forgot to change the word --K. Peake 05:15, 29 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • I am aware of the rules about American English for articles related to Americans, though I made a few mistakes because I'm used to my native British English so don't know the American version too strongly. --K. Peake 05:15, 29 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Sources are archived.  
  • Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
...but Rolling Stone has a limited article counter for new users. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:11, 29 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Oh I did not know that since I'm not subbed, fixed! --K. Peake 14:00, 29 July 2021 (UTC)Reply