Talk:Rohrbach Ro IX Rofix/GA1

Latest comment: 11 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 18:46, 6 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:46, 6 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Prelim

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  • No duplicated links
  • File:Ro IX 44218272.jpg seems correctly licensed but the 2023 date is patently false
    • LIkely date of upload
  • Article is stable
  • Earwig reports copyvio unlikely

Comments

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  • A word or two on who Kurt Tank was?
  • What would have triggered the optional 28 aircraft?
  • Presumably a positive assessment by Turkish pilots had an aircraft been available for them to fly.
  • "test-flight permit on 11 August" suggest repeating the year here for clarity

@Sturmvogel 66: A short article, but seems quite complete. Perhaps a word or two could be added at the end to note which of the aircraft did win the competition? Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:08, 10 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:24, 17 November 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Sturmvogel 66: Sorry for the delay, I've been caught up with work and didn't even see this pass by my watchlist. Passing as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:58, 29 November 2023 (UTC)Reply