Talk:Roman–Seleucid war/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed, although it would be nice to get the German-language maps translated into English.

@Sturmvogel 66: I will try to request for an English version of the map after the review. Other than that, all done.--Catlemur (talk) 18:29, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

• Find a synonym for maximalist in the lede.

 Done

• Link Hellespont, Laconia, Heraclea, phalanx, Cephallenians, Maronea

 Done

• but the specific rites for surrender were unclear and vitiated What does this mean? Religious rites?

The passage is about the rites of the Roman deditio ceremony of surrender of an enemy community.--Catlemur (talk) 17:25, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

Then add a link to deditio.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:19, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

 Done

• Antiochus then dispatched fleet reinforcements awkward

 Done

• Fortunately for the Romans, Hannibal's fleet was stopped by the Rhodians at the Battle of the Eurymedon reword

 Done

• Antiochus' army, driven to rout awkward

 Done

• one thousand talents – far beyond her ability to pay – was eventually given a break reword

 Done

• Broughton needs an OCLC number--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:01, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

 Done