Talk:Romania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2007

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

Winner of the national selection

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Locomondo won the national selection.194.105.107.36 20:49, 10 February 2007 (UTC)Reply

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BetacommandBot (talk) 19:56, 26 November 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:06, 3 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Am going to review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:06, 3 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "through the national selection Selecția Națională 2007 in February 2007." - I think it should be made more clearer that Selecția Națională was a national selection competition
  • "Romania reached fourth place." - more grammatical; finished in fourth place.
  • "Todomondo ultimately achieved 13th place in the contest's Grand Final," - the date of the 2007 Eurovision Grand Prix final would be better included in the lead

Competing entries and shows

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  • "a competition in order to select their entrant" - the words "in order" are redundant IMO
  • "Due to observers' multiple requests," - better; to multiple requests from observers,
  • "TVR decided to set up a commission" - establish might be more formal in this case
  • "to analyze several entries in regards to their compliance to the competition's regulations." - analyse

Semi-final 2

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  • "The second semi-final on 3 February had an audience of 5,511,000 viewers" - television audience
  • ""Love Struck" by Indiggo was disqualified since the duo failed to attend rehearsals." - because the duo
  • "gathering over 10,000 votes" - more than

Final

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  • The last two sentences of the first paragraph lack reliable sources
  • "at the MTV Romania Music Awards 2006 prior to 1 October 2006, TVR's cutoff date." - TVR's cutoff date of 1 October 2006.
  • "This led to the entry's exclusion from Selecția Națională, furthermore alongside "Crazy" by Morandi and Wassabi, " - the word "furthermore" looks out of place in this sentence
  • The word mass-disqualifications is not hyphenated

At Eurovision

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  • "and launched their own website in April 2007, www.todomondo.eu" - I don't think the name of the website is notable enough to be included
  • "selected countries, except the host country" - close repetition of the word "country"
  • "the show was aired on TVR," - broadcast is more formal
  • "Their show made use of pyrotechnics whose costs amounted to €5,000." - "whose" is not the correct word for this sentence
  • "Manole further stated:" - you don't need the word "further" in this case

Voting

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  • "Below is a breakdown of points awarded to Romania in the Grand Final, as well as by Romania in the semi-final and Grand Final of the contest." - repetition of the word "Romania"
  • "For the points announcement," - For the announcement of the points,

References

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  • Reference 5 is missing the author who wrote it
  • Reference 8 was published on 11 February 2007 not 11 February 2020

Will put on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 14:05, 3 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: I solved all your concerns. Thank you very much; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:23, 3 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Cartoon network freak: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 3 April 2020 (UTC)Reply