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Review (so far) by Jillian
edit- Need to do a bit more research and add more references to the article. - Commas, periods and other punctuation need to go AFTER the superscripted hyperlink to reference material. - Titles of films are italicized but do not italicize the year they were made. Sickcakez (talk) 17:40, 3 March 2018 (UTC)
Sophie Peer Review 3/4/18
edit-I think you should talk about each of the films that made him so important in more detail. Each one could probably have their own section which details exactly what his role was in the production, and the effects of the films in the world. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sbfrances (talk • contribs) 20:12, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
Review
editGood work. Consider developing different sections to highlight the different areas and periods of Pitts' work -- NFL, Film Group, etc. Also, make sure your bibliography is formatted correctly -- for example, "September 30, 2013". Issuu. Retrieved 2018-03-05 -- this isn't an issue of "Issuu," but of a Columbia College publication. AmyDeer (talk) 21:29, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
Ashley Peer Review
editGreat start, Jeremy. I think it could benefit from some organization -- try using headers and sub-headers. Try adding hyperlinks to other wiki pages in a few more places. For example, "Harvey Milk" and "Malcolm X".