Talk:Roosevelt Jones/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
edit- NBA Gatorade League should be just NBA G League
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:04, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- Wikilink college basketball, Rivals.com
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:08, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- Rebounds should be linked to Rebound (basketball)
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:11, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- "and committed to Butler." - and committed to playing for Buller
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:13, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Early life
edit- "he couldn't get his shot off " - could not; try to avoid quotations outside of quotes
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:14, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- "In eight grade," - eighth
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 23:17, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- "leader on a 14-15 team." - 14–15 team; also an en dash should be used in place for an hyphen for all respective game scores after this one
- I think I got them all. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:43, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- Wikilink Southeastern Conference to Southwestern Athletic Conference and Rivals to Rivals.com
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:44, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "but he didn't notice Jones's poor shooting style due to his athleticism." - did not
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:45, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
College career
edit- "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points to go with 10 rebounds." - remove "to go"
- Changed to "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points as well as 10 rebounds." ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:46, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Jones averaged 7.8 points and a team high" - team-high
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:50, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- Link layup
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:52, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Jones had 23 points in Butler's 67-64 loss to Notre Dame in the NCAA Tournament despite" - wikilink NCAA Tournament to 2015 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:53, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "and rarely shooting outside 15 feet." - use the convert template on 15 feet
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:55, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "he hit a last-second shot to defeat 17th ranked Cincinnati ater" - after
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:56, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- Wikilink Blowout to Blowout (sports)
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- "Jones earned a bachelor of arts degrees" - remove "a"
- I'm not so sure about this... my phrasing seems correct. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 00:57, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
Reference
edit- Ref 24 is dead and requires archiving
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:00, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
- Refs 30 and 34 are lacking the author
- Good catch. Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 01:02, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
That's all the nibbles I found. Going to be putting this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 9 June 2018 (UTC)