Talk:Rosemarie Scolaro Moser

Managing a conflict of interest

@SportsNeuropsychology100: please do not revert changes made by more experienced editors to the way you want the article to be. Wikipedia has a manual of style and the edits I have made are to comply with that. You have re-added unnecessary citations in the lead section, and external links in the body contrary to WP:EXT. You have a declared conflict of interest in this subject and therefore now that the article is no longer a draft, you must submit WP:EDITREQUESTs rather than edit the article directly. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 17:27, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

I apologize for my ignorance. There was confusion as the draft had not been accepted after it was accepted. So I had seen the last message as the rejection and went to edit again. Then there was a message that someone else was editing at the same time I was editing, and what I saw looked like an older version/draft. The message said to the merge the edits. Very confusing for me. Thank you for your patience.

Thank you also for the clarification about further submissions. I saw the note that an Early Education section needed to be added (which I had in my earliest version), so I re-added some of the info, but obviously incorrectly, not through the WP:EDITREQUESTs. At this point, I am happy to leave things up to the experienced editors to do what they see best with the entry. I will lurk and learn for now.

Thank you for your guidance. Best wishes for the holidays! SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:16, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Should google scholar and ExpertScape citations be included? They have been removed? SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:43, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Rosemarie Scolaro Moser: Early life and education and links for names/organizations

• What I think should be changed:

1. Someone has asked for Early Life and Education paragraph. I would like to supply one. 2. Some names and organizations can be linked to outside web sources. 3. Omit extra citations.

• Why it should be changed:

To respond to editor requests and to link to webpages for more information.

• References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):

SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 18:36, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

References

More information is needed before your edit request can be implemented.

Lewcm Talk to me! 21:14, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Text to add:

Early Life and Education:

The daughter of Sicilian immigrants, Moser was born in Hackensack, New Jersey, in 1954, and in 1976 received a B.A. with honors in psychology for her thesis under the guidance of Jonathan Baron, titled Training the General Skill of Short Cuts. Moser completed an M.S. in Psychological Services in 1977, and a PhD in 1981 from University of Pennsylvania with a dissertation under the guidance of Peter J. Kuriloff titled, Correlates of Perceived Role-Taking in Fraternity and Sorority Students[1] She taught on the faculty of the University of Pennsylvania and the College of New Jersey (formerly Trenton State College). SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 02:48, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

References

Reply 27-NOV-2023

  Edit request declined  

• The provided reference does not confirm certain elements in the proposed text, namely, everything beyond mentioning of the thesis.

Regards,  Spintendo  19:41, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

I would greatly appreciate your advice on the following. References needed are not available through internet links, but they are verifiable, as there are documents. For example, facts such as 1) Sicilian immigrants-birth certificates of parents; 2) birth in Hackensack-birth certificate from Hackensack; 3) professors- U of Penn transcripts. I could write up citations without links for these documents, as to where to find them, etc. but they can only be verified by wiki if I am able scan them directly to an editor. Otherwise, how does one verify early life information? thank you. SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 19:15, 28 November 2023 (UTC)

I have not heard back from you regarding my last reply. Are citations of verifiable birth certificates and a New York Times obituary acceptable to support Early Life information?Thank you. SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 04:40, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Dear Spintendo,

Is this appropriate to add for the missing Early Life and Education section? Please respond. Thank you.

Text to add:

Early Life and Education:

The daughter of Sicilian immigrants, Moser was born in Hackensack, New Jersey, in 1954 , and in 1976 received a Bachelor of Arts with honors in psychology, a Master of Science in Psychological Services in 1977, and a Doctor of Philosophy in 1981 from University of Pennsylvania with a dissertation under the guidance of Peter J. Kuriloff titled, Correlates of Perceived Role-Taking in Fraternity and Sorority Students [1] She was married to Robert L. Moser, MD , now deceased, Medical Director of Pathology at St. Francis Medical Center, Trenton, New Jersey and Co-chair of Laboratory Council for Trinity Health.

SportsNeuropsychology100 (talk) 01:56, 11 February 2024 (UTC)