Talk:Routing in cellular networks
Latest comment: 10 years ago by A.Minkowiski in topic technical language and strange grammar
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technical language and strange grammar
editIt is very hard to read this article. Does terminal mean a mobile phone? Is a base station a cell tower? Why not say what it is and avoid technical jargon. Also the sentences are too long and the grammar is poor. It is difficult to edit as I can't figure out what it is saying. Bhny (talk) 16:17, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Terminal means mobile/cell phone. Cell tower and base station are same things and known as cell sites. A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 17:06, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Terminal should be replaced with mobile phone, and base station with cell tower or at least explain that a base station is a cell tower. Terminal usually means computer terminal in everyday English.[[1]] The other things I removed in the lead made no sense to me. Please feel free to add it back if you can rewrite it in plain English. Bhny (talk) 17:48, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- You are right in your sense, now done bit more, trying my best to make it more precise to readers. Since article is related to communication(engineering field) different terms have their own meaning and concept when used in Engineering.A.Minkowiski _Lets t@lk 17:59, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Terminal should be replaced with mobile phone, and base station with cell tower or at least explain that a base station is a cell tower. Terminal usually means computer terminal in everyday English.[[1]] The other things I removed in the lead made no sense to me. Please feel free to add it back if you can rewrite it in plain English. Bhny (talk) 17:48, 29 June 2014 (UTC)