Talk:Russian ironclad Petropavlovsk

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 22:29, 30 June 2013 (UTC) Review will commence in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 22:29, 30 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Lead & Infobox

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Unless it is mentioned within your reference texts, how are you sure the vessel was named for the siege of Petropavlosk and not Petropavlosk? I assume it is mentioned in the given source?

See the first sentence of the Construction and service section.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:12, 1 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
Yes, but I was/am asking if you can confirm within your sources that the moniker is topical to the siege, as opposed to the city. As I said, I assume you can? QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:01, 2 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
Yes, it's named for the siege.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:03, 2 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

Description

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Fine here.

Construction and service

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I know in most of your previous articles, you mention the location of the ship's scrapping. Is it not possible to in this article? QatarStarsLeague (talk) 14:53, 1 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

I don't know for sure, but it was probably Saint Petersburg. But that's just my guess.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:13, 1 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
If you cannot source this information, that is fine. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:02, 2 July 2013 (UTC)Reply